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cindergal April 30 2008, 05:10:54 UTC
I knew there was a reason why I refreshed my friends page one more time!

This chapter was definitely worth waiting for. I love the dynamic between the two of them, with Remus becoming more confident. And your Sirius is just...guh.

Now why can't we all be abducted by a handsome, motorcycle riding wizard in a leather jacket? *g*

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mindabbles May 2 2008, 03:43:33 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad it didn't disappoint after all the lead up. 'Sirus...guh' is a lovely compliment. :). I guess their just aren't enough leather-wearing, motorbike-riding wizards to go around. :)

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myworldmytrue April 30 2008, 10:30:45 UTC
Holy...SMUT! That was quite something. I loved forceful, bossy Remus. It seems that Sirius is usually seen as the one to...ahem, initiate things, but I always love it when Remus gets his turn. Because I really think there's more to the book-loving werewolf than people give him credit for.

Nnngggh. This was VERY hot. Yay for devious plans, abductions, motorbikes and leather jackets!

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mindabbles May 2 2008, 03:45:13 UTC
Heee, thank you! I'm so happy the dynamic worked out. Remus is definitely a still water running deep in my book. I'm not very confident at writing smut, so YAY, thank you!

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brighty18 April 30 2008, 15:23:32 UTC
Daaaaaaaaamn! That was hot and sweet and beautiful and totally what we were all waiting for! It was wonderful to see them so happy together. Their banter - especially during sex - was just perfect. And good for Sirius for NOT pushing the envelope about Remus moving in - that's probably the best way to seduce him into it.

The image of Sirius in nothing but that leather jacket is, shall we say, utterly delicious and I quite enjoy an aggressive Remus. Wow!

And this made me laugh: "“You know me,” Sirius drawled. “Striving for subtlety in everything I do.”

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mindabbles May 2 2008, 03:47:08 UTC
Oh, thank you!! I'm so happy it was what you were waiting for. I thought they need some happy time - leaving all the war, moving in, and all the difficult decisons behind. Thanks for the lovely comment! :)

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rev02a April 30 2008, 21:06:15 UTC
Very nice! I have to agree... dominate Remus is pretty damn hot!

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mindabbles May 2 2008, 03:47:58 UTC
Thank you!! Yes, the assertive Remus, even this tentative one, seems to be a favorite. :)

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sambethe May 1 2008, 02:44:25 UTC
This came off great. :) As I already told you, I like the role reversal and think there is something true to life about it.

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mindabbles May 2 2008, 03:49:04 UTC
Thank you, and thanks for all of your help with this. That is seemed true to life is one of the nicest things you could say. :)

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