FIC: Of Silver Light and Shadows, Part 3 of 12

[mindabbles]

 
Title:   Of Silver Light and Shadows: Part 3 of 12
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[cindergal]

Ah, Moony, you are indeed a big idiot. :-) Another great chapter!

[mindabbles]

Poor Remus. He really couldn't stop himself. Thanks for reading!

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[acciochocolate]

The poem is just perfect. The quote by Disraeli is true but at the same time disheartening. Lily was the cleverest girl of her year, wasn't she? :) Wormtail and Moony both need to learn some social graces. ;)

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[mindabbles]

I'm really glad that the fic seems to be working with the prompts. I do love the potential of the Lily character and hope to make her real here. Yeah, not the smoothest conversation, although I thought Peter didn't do too badly. Thanks for your thougtful comment! :)

[myworldmytrue]

OMG, brilliant as always. My heart ached for Sirius. And I really just wanted to shake Remus hard and tell him to GO FIX THINGS. Which I'm sure he will, eventually.:) That poem was beautiful and spot on. It went excellently with the rest of the fic.

I also like your Peter. It's great to see more sides to him. He wasn't simply just a coward and a traitor.

Can't wait for the next part!

[mindabbles]

Thank you very much! Poor Sirius. Well one of them is going to have to fix things because I rarely write unrelenting angst. I'm really pleased the fic fit the prompt (the poem was a prompt from nest_of_spiders. Also glad that you like Peter - I can't imagine Peter becoming an animagi and being a loved Marauder if there was nothing more to him. Next part coming soon....

[myworldmytrue]

Yes, I really agree with brighty18 about Sirius...he's just so bloody earnest sometimes. Gets carried away by the mood, is so entranced by the moment that he just...says whatever's on his mind. Which is not to say that he doesn't mean it. I think he means every word. He just feels so strongly, TOO strongly. Does not know how to hide his emotions, in a way. Does not see a single reason why he should. The impulsive nature of youth.

Hah, quite drunk on red wine at the moment, so you should not expect anything even remotely intelligent of me. And I assume my boundless love for Sirius is quite obvious anyway. Sorry for all the babble. :D

[mindabbles]

Sirius is a wonderful character, isn't he? I, of course, feel like my interpretation of him is, you know, how he really is. I do actually know that there are many ways to write him - in all his different incarnations. But, one thing that seems to be consistent with most characterizations of him, is the intensity of his emotions. I assume my love for Sirius is apparent in everything I write. :)

Heh, hope your heads okay this morning.

[brighty18]

Yes, Moony IS an enormous idiot. I mean, yes, I suppose I know what he was going for, but still... poor Sirius! One of the many things I love about your fics is the earnestness of your Sirius. That is very much a quality I see him. He loves so... wholeheartendly!

And, you GO, Lily!

Oddly, we seem to be on the same page again with Umbridge. I just finished a fic in which she has a role in that same Dept. (indert "Twilight Zone Theme" here.)

Another wonderful chapter, please write more!

[mindabbles]

Well, yes, what I was going for was Remus being an enormous idiot! :). Oh, not entirely, I suppose. More like he was thrown off balance and didn't handle it well. I'm so pleased that you like Sirius here. I agree, earnestness and loving fully - amoung other, perhaps more irritating qualities, but always that.

Oh, dear. Do we have a brain bond? Are your goat cavorting with my bulls?

[gryffindorj]

Oh my heart hurts. I have this horrible constricting feeling in my chest. I almost died when Sirius said he loved Remus and Remus's response. Oh god and that everyone heard....omg so sad. This is so horrible the angst god you're killing me. Peter expecting Sirius to be able to pull the proper response but then not even trying *guh*. I could hardly read the Lily part I felt so distraught.

Remus's conversation with Peter lord woman this is just getting worse.

[mindabbles]

Oh, I'm sorry. Breathe. I think I seized up a bit when I wrote it. I really don't want you to die. Peter wanted to help.

(don't worry too much, you know I'm a totally soppy romantic - it can't go on like this for too long)

Thanks for commenting. :)

(Oh, and I'm on team MWPP)

[gryffindorj]

I know Peter wanted to help and it's part of what is killing me. God this was just so good. See it was so angst I almost forgot to mention the sex description was simulutaniosly hot and uncomfortable, bravo!

OH I know you are on MWPP. (Yes that is said with lots of attitude) LOL *hug*

I saw yesterday I'm just hoping for awesome fics all the way around.

[mindabbles]

Oh, I'm glad you liked it! (you know, before Remus went and ruined it)

That's right I am. You got something to say about it?