Challenge Response: Nanofiction

[cotidiana]

Under Her Skin

She screwed the skin flap back onto Maria’s forearm. “False readings, you say? I don’t see anything wrong with your emoderm panel. But, I see it’s acting up, registering in the reds-excitement, anxiety, unrest-when there’s no stimulus around. Just me and you sitting here. Anything bothering…” Maria’s lips prevented hers from saying “

Comments

[redvelvetcanopy]

I love it! Android attraction!

[cotidiana]

Thanks! Who said anything about androids? ;) Would humans be better off wearing their emotions on their sleeves...or rather forearms?

[bemoan1000]

Under her skin literally and figuratively.
I also like your icon. It reminds me of this picture of the dotted room.
http://community.livejournal.com/crackwhore_muse/71997.html

[cotidiana]

Yes! I like genre writing because IMO it provides more opportunities to combine the literal and figurative.

I tried to click to see the dotted room but access was denied me.

I like your gin walking--so cute but I know he's also dangerous--and I LOVE your dark teddy icon. Are you a fan of batz maru? He's a mix of cute and dark, as well.

[bemoan1000]

I don’t know why I like gin. He annoyed me at first, but now he is my favorite character from Bleach. The dark teddy is a Snape bear created by Dizilla aka Dianamoon. I don’t know anything about Batz Maru, but he does look familiar.

Sorry about the link. Here is another one and it is done by the artist Yayoi Kusama.

http://www.roslynoxley9.com.au/images/galleries/Yayoi%20Kusama%202002/001.jpg

[cotidiana]

Wow. Very neat room to look at.

[angelps_7]

OMG I love this. Absolutely lovely!!

[cotidiana]

Thank you! Thanks for reading and commenting!

[papertissues]

This sci-fi femmeslash is really jolting to read. :) I'm enjoying it.

[cotidiana]

I caught that clever pun/reference with "jolting." Glad you like it. Thanks for your kind comment!