White Hot Erotica Challenge 2013

[patricia_writes]

Comments

[authoress_susan]

S-sexy! I loved how you used the peacock feathers prompt. I was picturing tickling, but this is much more sophisticated, elegant. Lovely descriptions of two bodies meeting on a dark and stormy night. It could be anybody, anywhere, anytime.

[patricia_writes]

I thought about the tickling, but it felt cliche. I'm worried that too much of what I just wrote there is cliche... I wonder if that's a risk the longer you write--like you feel like you've written this same idea or theme so many times before?

[authoress_susan]

I agree. The tickling would be cliche. And no, there is freshness in your piece.

[patricia_writes]

And I'm glad you picked up on the anybody idea--I kind of wanted to be androgynous with this. Like the thrusting could be with one appendage *cough* or maybe fingers or something silicone. Multiple interpretations there.