Mythical May Challenge

[ashton_albright]

~~~Title: The All-Mother’s Child~~~

~~~Prompt: Geas~~~

As with all of the men of the temple he made his way to the chamber.  It was part of his duty to offer himself to Her.  The room was bland; She did not ornaments to tell others Her power.  He knelled and waited.

She looked at the man knelling.  His fate was Hers to seal.  Recently

Comments

[patricia_writes]

It's tempting to encourage you to go on with this--it has so many tantalizing elements to it!

(And because I'd want someone to tell me--I think there is a word missing from your third sentence perhaps; also "knelled" s/b "kneeled" and "knelling" s/b "kneeling".)

[ashton_albright]

I do believe you are correct. The word is incorrect, please never hesitate to tell me any thing like that. Part of the reason I do these its to improve my writing if no one points out the errors how can I improve? I still fix it once I get to my computer.

I can't believe I didn't notice the spelling error I try to read over everything before I post.

[gelsey]

Very intriguing. I like to see where this goes.