Comments | mind_spark: Gothic Horror Challenge 2010

gelsey in mind_spark

Oct 20, 2010 00:49

Comments 17

lilian_cho October 20 2010, 06:50:22 UTC

Aww. I like the first line and your last phrase.

gelsey October 20 2010, 19:32:57 UTC

Thanks! You wouldn't believe the amount of cutting I had to do to size this down.

lilian_cho October 20 2010, 19:42:34 UTC

Heh, I know what you mean. "Calico" was 185 words. Then I cut it down. Then I added a line. Then I had to cut it down again X-D

patricia_writes October 20 2010, 11:15:39 UTC

There's so much hope in this, even though it's full of despair, too.

gelsey October 20 2010, 19:33:20 UTC

He wants hope. He's been kicked enough I think. Thanks!

roseofthewest October 20 2010, 14:47:16 UTC

Somehow we're better people when we give when we give more than we can afford, and she will receive something, too.

gelsey October 20 2010, 19:33:41 UTC

Yes, I think she will. Thanks!

delayed_poet October 20 2010, 20:35:02 UTC

Awwww, poignant message in this one! It truly is the most precious gift when it's all one has to give.

<3

gelsey October 20 2010, 20:39:36 UTC

It really is. Poor leper. :( Thanks!

laceymoibella October 21 2010, 00:14:19 UTC

The kindness of others does wonders to raise a person's psyche.

gelsey October 22 2010, 21:15:06 UTC

It really does, doesn't it? Thanks for reading.