Warmth

[minacoleta]

TITLE: Warmth
AUTHOR: Mina
FANDOM/COMIC TITLE: Avengers, but I guess it could be AU
CHARACTERS/PAIRING: Steve Rogers/Tony Stark (Captain America/Iron Man)
CATEGORY: Slash
RATING: G
WORD COUNT: 741
WARNINGS: None
SUMMARY: Drabblet wrote around the prompt 'warmth'
DISCLAIMER: I don't own the characters within, and I'm not making any money of of writing about

Comments

[crimsonquills]

This was wonderful! Warm both in content and in mood, which is perfect. The bit about Steve picking up a stick because it had an interesting shape made me think of artist!Steve. :-)

Also, I like your writing style. The language doesn't get in the way of the story, which I find to be true in a lot (a LOT) of fan fic.

Thank you!

[minacoleta]

This was wonderful! Warm both in content and in mood, which is perfect.

Yeah, the two of them need more happy in their relationship. Too many times do I see them angsting over crap that ISN'T WORTH IT *brain waves people who write that stuff*

he bit about Steve picking up a stick because it had an interesting shape made me think of artist!Steve. :-)

Hah! Yeah, he was probably going to draw it later, and when he realizes that part of it is singed from... here, I'll write it out!

Steve: *picks up stick* Tony...
Tony: *looks up from whatever he's looking at* hmm?
Steve: What happened to my stick? *raises stick*
Tony: *stares before averting eyes* *guiltily* I don't knwo what you're talking about....

XDD Totally can imagine that.

Also, I like your writing style.

Thanks! Right back at 'cha! ;D

The language doesn't get in the way of the story, which I find to be true in a lot (a LOT) of fan fic.

Language, as in when they speak to each other, or just my writing in general? O:

Thank you!You're welcome! You deserve it

[crimsonquills]

Yeah, the two of them need more happy in their relationship. Too many times do I see them angsting over crap that ISN'T WORTH IT *brain waves people who write that stuff*

So, so true. Although, Tony really will angst at the drop of a hat. *g* But it's nice to let him be happy sometimes. :-) I have to start being more selective about the fic I read. I'm getting tired of the post Civil War angst.

Hah! Yeah, he was probably going to draw it later, and when he realizes that part of it is singed from... here, I'll write it out!

*giggles* That would totally happen. And when Tony was caught, he'd try to argue that the singed end added to the aesthetic value of the object. *g*

Language, as in when they speak to each other, or just my writing in general? O:

Your writing in general. When they speak to each other would be dialogue. :-)

[minacoleta]

I have to start being more selective about the fic I read. I'm getting tired of the post Civil War angst.

I know what you mean. I have to do the same thing.

And when Tony was caught, he'd try to argue that the singed end added to the aesthetic value of the object.

Totally! And then Steve would forgive him cause he's Steve, lol.

Your writing in general. When they speak to each other would be dialogue.

[kijikun]

Aww very sweet.

[minacoleta]

Ugh this si so bad... >: But thank you for the comment! >w