Okay, so I don't have time to read this right now, but I am like bookmarking it 'cause I think I love your writing style and-
I saw the words "sign language" used in the same sentence as "Dean", and I kind of think I have to read this regardless of what it's going to be about. 'Cause, Dean and Sign are like two of my favorite things on the planet. Jumbled in there with coffee, music, chocolate and butterflies or something.
Anyway, I actually just wanted to ask, 'cause I wasn't sure but is this story of yours finished? ...I know, I am on spring break and I have plenty of time but I'd rather not embark on something that I'm never going to get to see an end to...
So I am hoping this is a really long one-shot, and not a multi-thing, but I didn't see it say it anywhere, although I am so tired I might have missed it.
Oh well! This story looks fascinating. Will read and share my thoughts, sometime in the near future. :)
I loved reading this! The strong characterization of everyone - even the walk-in OCs was vivid and believable and really fleshed out the story. I liked how you didn't villify anyone and how authentic Dean and Sam were as kids.
However what I loved best was how you paired small plot details, simple words and sure pacing to build the complexity of your world. It really works well from the POV of Dean and Sam.
This is kind of subtly breathtaking. The characterization of everyone, Dean, John, Jim, Bobby, random OCs, and especially Sam, which is unbelievable considering how difficult it is to make characters that age sound believable. I want to quote bits back at you but there are so many and I want to twirl you around and feed you cake and fangirl at you because I've been trying to read something really well written for the last two days but I couldn't find anything until this thing, which is really really fantastic.
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And I shall be getting to reading sometime soon.
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Whatever else are siblings for? :D
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I saw the words "sign language" used in the same sentence as "Dean", and I kind of think I have to read this regardless of what it's going to be about. 'Cause, Dean and Sign are like two of my favorite things on the planet. Jumbled in there with coffee, music, chocolate and butterflies or something.
Anyway, I actually just wanted to ask, 'cause I wasn't sure but is this story of yours finished? ...I know, I am on spring break and I have plenty of time but I'd rather not embark on something that I'm never going to get to see an end to...
So I am hoping this is a really long one-shot, and not a multi-thing, but I didn't see it say it anywhere, although I am so tired I might have missed it.
Oh well! This story looks fascinating. Will read and share my thoughts, sometime in the near future. :)
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However what I loved best was how you paired small plot details, simple words and sure pacing to build the complexity of your world. It really works well from the POV of Dean and Sam.
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