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mimblexwimble

so remember then [spn][one-shot]

Sep 15, 2010 23:37

Title: so remember then
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Dean
Word Count: 1900
Rating: PG
Summary: One day Dad put Sam in charge, said he needed to talk to a few people, that maybe he had a lead on how to turn Dean back into a twenty-year-old. Then he left. And he didn't come back.
Notes: Inspired by maypoles's prompt at mad_server's Sneezy Boys Comment Fic ( Read more... )

one-shot, innocence 'verse, supernatural: fanfiction

Comments 96

debbiel66 September 16 2010, 04:34:44 UTC

God, that last line just killed me. Made me swallow hard, just like Sam, it did.

New season coming up. Please write and write and write. Okay? &hearts

mimblexwimble October 23 2011, 17:57:42 UTC

Thank you! ♥

borgmama1of5 September 16 2010, 04:35:05 UTC

Oh. Wow.

The mix of emotions Sam is feeling--
"He's not sure that a life where he's safe and where he can keep Dean safe is better than a life without the Dean he could lean on, the Dean who put him back together with strong, work-rough hands more times than he can count, the Dean who'd lock Sam in a stranglehold and rake his knuckles over Sam's skull and call him "Sammy" and look at him in that way that made it easier to bear Dad's frowns and Dad's disappointment and endless nightmares this life brought."

Just word-perfect.

If I ask very, very nicely, do you think there could be more?

mimblexwimble October 23 2011, 17:57:58 UTC

Thank you so very much!

sistabro September 16 2010, 04:35:07 UTC

Oh this was lovely. Full of quiet intense moments and the last couple of lines are just poetry.

The puppy thing was and odd moment for me, though. I simultaneously wanted to snicker at Sam and be all weepy with Dean, because Sam is such a push over and little Dean is gonna trample all over him and it will be hilarious, and yet, poor little grieving Dean *is conflicted, but in a good way*

mimblexwimble October 23 2011, 17:59:12 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, Sam's going to have a lot of trouble saying no to Dean.

goddamnbatman September 16 2010, 04:44:07 UTC

This was gorgeous. Sam's a brave kid <333

mimblexwimble October 23 2011, 17:59:25 UTC

Isn't he just? Thank you for reading!

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mad_server September 16 2010, 21:31:32 UTC

doing it *right* is going to mean it's not ever *his* Dean. Guh.

Ow even more! That's so true! Arghghhh, see, it IS death fic!

mimblexwimble October 23 2011, 18:25:58 UTC

It really kind of is. :'(

mimblexwimble October 23 2011, 17:59:45 UTC

Thank you so much!