fic: Cold, mashed swede (2/2)

[mimarie]

title: Cold, mashed swede (2/2)
fandom: Doctor Who / Torchwood
characters/ pairing: Jack Harkness/Tish Jones, the Master and other Valiant 'residents.' TW mentions, including canon pairings.
word count 11,000 (17,500 total)
Rating & warnings: NC17. Dark-fic, contains non-consensual sexual activity, other violence and torture. Oh, and swearing.
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Comments

[canaana]

Oh god. I don't know about Jack, but I think you broke *me*.

Impressively written. I particularly like Jack's stream of consciousness as he wobbles back and forth between just being Jack and being mad. And your rendition of Tish is heartwrending.

[mimarie]

I want to say 'I'm really glad you enjoyed it,' but it seems rather inappropriate in the circumstances. And as for 'I'm really glad it broke you,' well...

Thank you! :)

[teleens_journal]

This story is really f'd up. I like that.

Thanks for writing!

[mimarie]

This story is really f'd up.

Thank you!

[rift_bound]

So dark and devastating... Jack's year on the Valiant always intrigues me. I can't imagine how he came out of it all without going insane. Whenever I think of it, I want to beat the Doctor just for allowing it to happen, and sitting there doing nothing while his friend was used as cannon fodder to distract the Master. It's just evil.

You've really captured the horror of it all.

[mimarie]

*nods* It's utterly horrible when you think about it (and oh my have I thought about it), better still, it was all there, in a 'kids'' programme on a Saturday night... Damn but I love the BBC!

You've really captured the horror of it all.

Thank you. (I didn't imagine this would have wide appeal, especially after all this time, but it's really good to know I got it right!)

[beguiled_child]

Wow, just, wow.

I loved this. So tragic and disturbing, and yet touching at the same time! It was confusing too, but it showed so beautifully well all the rambling in Jack's mind as he gradually broke a little bit more. It fit completely.

Wonderful :)

[mimarie]

*G* Thank you! :)

Cold, Mashed....

[arameth2001]

How devastating for both of them not only did he finally kill the joy of sex in Jack and Tish; but the master also destroyed a friendship, and their support for one another. Too bad Harold Saxon died so easily.