Comments | millstone1005: OC fic: Disneyland for Newpsies

millstone1005

OC fic: Disneyland for Newpsies

Nov 07, 2006 11:46

Disneyland for Newpsies
Title: Disneyland for Newpsies
Fandom: The O.C.
Characters: Ryan, Eric & Brad Ward
Spoilers: up through 4.1 The Avengers
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing related to The O.C.. No profit taken.
Description: Ryan gets some visitors at the bar. Takes place some time before The Avengers.
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fanfic, one shots

Comments 12

fredsmith518 November 7 2006, 20:03:19 UTC

Some funny pictures:D Love the title.

I'm glad you saved me from myself with those boys, no 'little guy'!

millstone1005 November 7 2006, 20:54:51 UTC

Thanks. Being spoiler-free, I didn't know they were going to return this season (and didn't know they were going to make them twins), but I kind of thout that one of them could be brought back to be friends with Kaitlin, since they were about the same age, and we'd seen them before.

anne35 November 7 2006, 20:10:50 UTC

Their golden-retriever-ness should have given them away anyway. That is so right. If Luke was a big golden retriever then the twins are golden retriever puppies. I've only seen the two episodes, but I really like the twins. You got their underclassmen geekiness down perfectly.

millstone1005 November 7 2006, 20:55:09 UTC

Thanks. I've only seen one episode, so you've got a leg up on me.

60schic November 8 2006, 00:11:09 UTC

Tres cute, millstone. Ya gotta love the Retriever Brothers.

millstone1005 November 8 2006, 00:50:42 UTC

Thanks, Chic. "The Retriever Brothers" is very cute, too.

60schic November 8 2006, 00:56:36 UTC

You may have that, if you plan to write them some more!

muchtvs November 8 2006, 01:53:42 UTC

Bozo plucked up his courage. “Kaitlin said you worked here -“

Blondie interrupted his brother. “No, she said he lived here.”

Bozo elbowed his twin in the ribs and loudly whispered, “That can’t be right. Who lives in a bar?”

Hee Hee

PERFECT

And I love the twins. An actual "new kids" addition I can stand.

millstone1005 November 8 2006, 02:22:36 UTC

Thank you. I love that part, too.

fredsmith518 November 8 2006, 16:46:00 UTC

Me 3 and I forgot to tell you.

helen_c November 8 2006, 15:02:10 UTC

Very nice.

Or actually, more like they were tourists in some undeveloped country and couldn’t help but stare at the strange natives.
Probably how they feel, actually.

Ryan took his cleaning rag off his shoulder and handed it to the kid, who quickly snatched it and then got out of striking range. Smart kid. He’d be fine.
Love this, and the fact Ryan wondered which one of them was the fighter before striking. Nice touch. :)

millstone1005 November 8 2006, 15:24:31 UTC

Thanks, Helen.