Seventeen Steps (22/?)
Title: Seventeen Steps (22/?)
Author: millionstar
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: Will vary, this chapter R
Warnings: A hint of sexytimes
Overall Summary: Matthew is intrigued by his newest neighbor.
Feedback: Would be lovely, if you are so inclined.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse; the following is pure fiction.
A/N: As always, thanks to dolce_piccante, myz_bee. Couldn't do this ( Read more... )
Author: millionstar
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: Will vary, this chapter R
Warnings: A hint of sexytimes
Overall Summary: Matthew is intrigued by his newest neighbor.
Feedback: Would be lovely, if you are so inclined.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse; the following is pure fiction.
A/N: As always, thanks to dolce_piccante, myz_bee. Couldn't do this ( Read more... )
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You finally updated!!! I'm so happy!!!
*off to read it now*
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I feel so warm and fuzzy now. *grins happily*
All of them together; with Matt's dad joining them. And it's so nice to see he really wants to be part of Matthew's life again.
Dom's little talk to Matt's dad at the end made me smile so much. Telling him not to hurt him again. You GO Dom!
And let's not forget the absolutely gorgeous lovemaking scene (seems too crude to call it 'sex' at the moment! Lol)
xxxx
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BEAUTIFUL. you know, i like a dirty, filthy sex scene as much as anybody else, but nothing shivers my timbers like a scene such as this one. there's something so inherently sexy about their easy pace and deliberation, it really emphasizes the fact that they're in love with one another. sex doesn't always have to be about getting off, and this is proof. (the preceding dialogue was just lovely, too - i confess my stomach flip-flopped a bit when dom said they'd never made love in his bed, oh.)
and dom being all protective of matt in the second section? oh, my heart. i really do hope george holds up his end of the bargain.
lovely work, deniese - looking forward to the next chapter. :3
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There's something about these two, I dunno, I just have this all-encompassing urge to write them in ridiculously romantic situations. It's easy to get lost in their little world. And if fic isn't about escapism at it's finest, well, then I just need to quit writing altogether. :)
Thank you so very much, hon. I appreciate it! <3
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The small moments here and there were just beautiful :3
I'm so in love with this!!!
But I really want to know what happens next!
Update soon :)
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More soon, I promise...
&hearts
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Anyway, I read the story and I must say, you have rendered me speechless. Just the tenderness and vulnerability present in the story makes my heart ache with joy. From how Matthew and Dominic made love to the way Matthew's father was welcomed at the gathering. The small, unnoticed moments amplified by your writing. Simply beautiful. (:
"I want to lie here at night and be able to smell you on my pillow," he continued, pulling Matthew further into the room by his belt loops, the brunet's arms around his neck. "To close my eyes and remember the sounds you make when you come in my bed." He kissed one porcelain cheekbone. "Can I have you, gorgeous, please?" His last word was whispered shakily into Matthew's lips as they reached his bed.
Every lover's wish to hear their partner utter these sweet words.
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First, I'm happy that a post from me made you do a double-take, haha! Secondly, your kind words are very much appreciated, believe me. There's something about SS... whenever I slip back into this universe all I seem to feel are love and tenderness and a sense of vulnerability, so I'm happy to learn that I've conveyed that even a little in my writing. :) I won't lie - I struggle with SS these days it seems, but support like this makes me even more determined to keep it going as long as I can.
Thank you so much. You've boosted my confidence in spades...
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