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greeneyelove July 7 2008, 00:54:31 UTC
At least she's accepting Bart's love and not pushing him away. Not that Bart would be pushed away. He loves her too much.

This is certainly painful, but it has a bittersweetness as well because of the hope!

Very well done!

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milleniumrex July 7 2008, 17:03:39 UTC
Thanks. Bart can be very persistent when he wants to be, and I don't see him giving up on Rose no matter what.

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v5_vendetta July 7 2008, 02:19:29 UTC
Thank you. There is a light at the end of that tunnel, and that light just happens to come from the sunny smile of one Bart Allen. I am certainly looking forward to seeing how Rose repays Bart for sticking with her, if you're in the mood to write erotica.

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milleniumrex July 7 2008, 17:09:36 UTC
Hmm....I don't usually write erotica, but this scenario piqued my interest. It's a more immediate version, and involves a telepathic assist, but it's still smexy.

I don't know if I'd write it on my own, but I just put up a meme that lets you request it, if you want. ;)

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zatanna July 29 2008, 23:41:30 UTC
Finding good Bart/Rose fic is so hard. This definatly was amazing.

It tugged at the heartstrings, but Bart would totally do it for her.

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milleniumrex July 30 2008, 03:15:21 UTC
Thanks! I actually wrote a sequel, if you want to read it.

http://milleniumrex.livejournal.com/30669.html#cutid1

And thanks again for the reviews!

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