I really liked this poem.
It adds new depth to it when you read it aloud.
I like that you connect ideas throughout the whole thing.
And your use of adjectives is really profound.
I like the word "humanness" more than anything else I can think of at the moment.
I think it's a funny thing that there are so many poems out there that feel meaningless, and seems to be without direction.
But your message is really clear.