FIRST OF ALL oh my god Josie bless you for writing this no wonder i'm in love with you
SECOND OF ALL you know i'm a sucker for dumb, oblivious sekai and you did that perfectly omg. I was legit rooting for jongin to kiss sehun during truth or dare and for a moment it was like yes jongdae god bless you and your devious ways for getting my otp to kiss and stop being dumb and then jongin just kinda stomped on my poor little sekai heart lol thanks jongin. But that's okay bc thank you chanyeol for being sehun's shoulder to lean on.
“But you’ve never hung out with him this much. Even Baekhyun is getting a little irritated,” and this is where i was like oH SHIT BAEK AND CHANYEOL ARE A SECRET THING FUCK
“I do not act like a jealous boyfriend!” shut up jongin yes you do
“Your hand is touching my dick.”
“Shut up, you know you like it.” IM LAUGHING
i was so hoping for sekai to do the do when they went skinny dipping but i ended up wanting to cuddle sehun instead my poor little baby
OH MY GOD I WAS GIGGLING AND MAKING WEIRD NOISES WHEN I READ THIS DFGJSIJDFIS you are the fucking worst oh my god, how can a comment make me this excited lmao. I'm laughing when I imagine you being like ''YES SMUT oh fuck no OKAY NOW SMUT well no then'' someone help me I can't handle you. I'm like cringing here when I read what you have quoted because oh my god I'm so embarrassed about the smut but I'm so so so glad you liked it because you're my senpai and I love you. I will work harder next time and make better fics when I have time and I don't have a deadline.
Jealous Jongin is the best and oh god yes possessive Jongin, even tho he was that only at the ending there but who cares it was still there lmao. I'm just smiling here like an idiot Jenn why'd you do this to me you make my heart all warm with your excitement and love /blushes/ I need a fan to cool my face. I could cry for this comment why aRE YOU LIKE THIS
I love you a lot too and I'll try to make killer fics that you enjoy in the future.
HELLO I AM THE ONE WHO SENT IN THIS PROMPT HAHAHA im sorry my comment comes so late I only come around to read it now.
first of all, i want to say thank you for picking this prompt and writing such a lovely story uwu u don't know how happy i felt when i saw that somebody picked my prompt!!!!
i love chanyeol in this. I love sehun and jongin in this. all characters are typical dumb students who do the weirdest shits bc they are young, so "who cares right?" the highlights of the story, ofc, are sekai scenes. They share so many heartfelt moments. I love their confession. i even love them pining after one another (even though those give me chest pain lol). oblivious sekai in love is my kryptonite. im waiting and waiting and waiting for the instance jongin realizes (or more like acts on) his feelings. and when he does and they do the thing i let out a sigh of relief like finally!!! took u so long!!!!!
thank u again for writing this. im so looking forward to reading other fics from u (hopefully sekai, yes? :D)
I... am so sorry. This fic is definitely not the best I can do because I had to write it in such a hurry so I didn't really have time to think about what I was writing. I had really big plans for this (and I still do, I plan to write a better version of this) but there were some things that happened in my life that made me unable to write and then suddenly the deadline was really really close.
I'm very honored that you liked this and I think you wanted something dirtier? Lmao but somehow it ended up like this. Now I'm just embarrassed to know that it was your prompt and this is what you get because you're senpai and I love your fics and oh my god I should have worked harder on this.
Thank you so much for your compliments and comment and thank you for reading this! I will work hard to get better at writing and yes I will write mostly (if not only) sekai since that is my otp. I'm so flattered that you liked this and I might have squealed a little after I got over the shock that this was your prompt lmao. I hope you will enjoy my fics
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awwwwww pls don't apologize. you took time to write the fic and had fun with it and i, in return, got my prompt written and felt so satisfied with it and so many sekai readers out there got the chance to read a new sekai love story. what's better than that honestly? :"D I love it when we could gush over mutual interests especially something we're both passionate about.
I have no doubt that your stories will only get better from here. considering it's your first fic and you must work under time constraint, you did a good job, 15k no less!! believe me when i say my first fic was an abomination. it was .... so bad i didnt even wanna reread or post it on my lj lmao.
when i wrote the prompt it's true i wanted a lot of sexy sekai times, but lbr no amount of sexy sekai times would suffice so...haha
Oh lmao I'm sorry I'm not that good with smut and stuff. Also this isn't exactly my first fic even so uh... yeah. I'm just not that used to writing in english. The first english fic I wrote was exo too and I published it on AFF but I took it down after a while because it was so embarrassing and horrible and I hope no one ever reads it again haha. I'm still amazed about the length tho, I never thought I would be able to write +15k tbh, that was an accomplishment for me and I'm proud of it :)
asdfghjkl yes I will work hard to write more! Thank you for being so kind ;w;
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I think they will be fine in the future!
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FIRST OF ALL oh my god Josie bless you for writing this no wonder i'm in love with you
SECOND OF ALL you know i'm a sucker for dumb, oblivious sekai and you did that perfectly omg. I was legit rooting for jongin to kiss sehun during truth or dare and for a moment it was like yes jongdae god bless you and your devious ways for getting my otp to kiss and stop being dumb and then jongin just kinda stomped on my poor little sekai heart lol thanks jongin. But that's okay bc thank you chanyeol for being sehun's shoulder to lean on.
“But you’ve never hung out with him this much. Even Baekhyun is getting a little irritated,” and this is where i was like oH SHIT BAEK AND CHANYEOL ARE A SECRET THING FUCK
“I do not act like a jealous boyfriend!” shut up jongin yes you do
“Your hand is touching my dick.”
“Shut up, you know you like it.” IM LAUGHING
i was so hoping for sekai to do the do when they went skinny dipping but i ended up wanting to cuddle sehun instead my poor little baby
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Jealous Jongin is the best and oh god yes possessive Jongin, even tho he was that only at the ending there but who cares it was still there lmao. I'm just smiling here like an idiot Jenn why'd you do this to me you make my heart all warm with your excitement and love /blushes/ I need a fan to cool my face. I could cry for this comment why aRE YOU LIKE THIS
I love you a lot too and I'll try to make killer fics that you enjoy in the future.
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im sorry my comment comes so late I only come around to read it now.
first of all, i want to say thank you for picking this prompt and writing such a lovely story uwu u don't know how happy i felt when i saw that somebody picked my prompt!!!!
i love chanyeol in this. I love sehun and jongin in this. all characters are typical dumb students who do the weirdest shits bc they are young, so "who cares right?" the highlights of the story, ofc, are sekai scenes. They share so many heartfelt moments. I love their confession. i even love them pining after one another (even though those give me chest pain lol). oblivious sekai in love is my kryptonite. im waiting and waiting and waiting for the instance jongin realizes (or more like acts on) his feelings. and when he does and they do the thing i let out a sigh of relief like finally!!! took u so long!!!!!
thank u again for writing this. im so looking forward to reading other fics from u (hopefully sekai, yes? :D)
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I... am so sorry. This fic is definitely not the best I can do because I had to write it in such a hurry so I didn't really have time to think about what I was writing. I had really big plans for this (and I still do, I plan to write a better version of this) but there were some things that happened in my life that made me unable to write and then suddenly the deadline was really really close.
I'm very honored that you liked this and I think you wanted something dirtier? Lmao but somehow it ended up like this. Now I'm just embarrassed to know that it was your prompt and this is what you get because you're senpai and I love your fics and oh my god I should have worked harder on this.
Thank you so much for your compliments and comment and thank you for reading this! I will work hard to get better at writing and yes I will write mostly (if not only) sekai since that is my otp. I'm so flattered that you liked this and I might have squealed a little after I got over the shock that this was your prompt lmao. I hope you will enjoy my fics ( ... )
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I have no doubt that your stories will only get better from here. considering it's your first fic and you must work under time constraint, you did a good job, 15k no less!! believe me when i say my first fic was an abomination. it was .... so bad i didnt even wanna reread or post it on my lj lmao.
when i wrote the prompt it's true i wanted a lot of sexy sekai times, but lbr no amount of sexy sekai times would suffice so...haha
and I'm so excited to read more from u <3333
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asdfghjkl yes I will work hard to write more! Thank you for being so kind ;w;
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