Sweet Vs Sexy (NC-17)

[iknowitsbutters]

Title: Sweet Vs Sexy
Author: robert3A-SN on ff.net
Character/pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: M/NC-17 for smut
Word Count: 6,994 words
Genres: Romance, smut
Summary: Jeff takes it slow and tender with Annie in their first few times together, believing her to be a virgin and still more romantic about sex. But although Jeff actually grows to like doing it

Comments

[blovich]

"Vaughn was too much of a vegetarian to eat this kind of meal"

LOL, that line killed me.

[nyclove3]

[crittab]

Very cute. You're smut is getting better and better each time you give it a go. You have a little addiction to the "...." filler though. My philosophy is if you're going to go for it, just go for it. If you're referencing 'come', just say 'come', if you want to say that Annie's tits make Jeff hard, just say it. I realize it's a stream of consciousness thing in Annie's head, but do you think Annie is so repressed in her own mind that she can't *think* the words? Ever since Dungeons and Dragons I can't see Annie has being that sexually repressed anymore.

[claymay83]

Wow. I’m not sure who’s luckier here, Jeff or Annie.