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secret santa fic for f_belisarius

Jan 05, 2014 15:51

Title: A Christmas Kerfuffle
Author: fangirl_101
Word count: 1842
Rating: PG with just a couple swears
Spoilers: None really, AU after season 4
Disclaimer: Not mine
Author's note: This is my secret santa fic for f_belisarius. I managed to include two of the prompts: 1. A Christmas party that's going horribly wrong (but doesn't have to end that way). 2. The study group ( Read more... )

author: fangirl_101, fan: fiction, fic exchange: secret santa, fan: fiction (completed)

Comments 14

f_belisarius January 5 2014, 21:30:08 UTC

I love it.

And I laughed out loud! Particularly liked Abed: 'It’s clichéd. It’s Christmas-themed. And since the party is in three hours, it’s pretty much our best option' And Jeff: '“Greendale doesn’t even have docks!” Jeff yelled. “We’re a landlocked state!”'

I also like both twists at the end. Particularly that they're together, which I guessed, but which makes the earlier details of them really sweet (plus I love that Annie decided not to come clean). Not to mention the idea of the Dean (possibly with some dogs and a pony) showing up later.

To summarise: It's great. Thank you! And Merry Christmas!

fangirl_101 January 6 2014, 01:29:02 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it! I haven't written fic in a while, so I was a bit rusty and nervous about the characters' voices. So I'm super thrilled you loved it.

reasoon January 5 2014, 23:11:40 UTC

very nice :)

once i had a very similiar idea for a fic so i like this very much!!

fangirl_101 January 6 2014, 01:30:37 UTC

I always liked the idea of the group mistaking mistletoe for some poisonous plant and getting covered in rashes. It just feels very Greendale to me. So when I got f_belisarius's prompts for the fic exchange it seemed to fit perfectly. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

claymay83 January 6 2014, 04:19:43 UTC

This was hilarious. Loved the excess of the plan (they never thought covering every available surface with mistletoe was a bit much), and how it went horribly wrong. And Jeff and Annie in a secret relationship is never bad at all.

fangirl_101 January 6 2014, 13:02:35 UTC

Haha. When the group does shenanigans, they go BIG, right? I was thinking of Annie breaking Abed's "Batman" DVD, and how that situation just spiraled completely out of control. Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

greta_garbo January 6 2014, 12:52:57 UTC

I'm so disappointed that you didn't go with 'Merry Itchmas' for the title.

fangirl_101 January 6 2014, 13:07:40 UTC

For real? It's so hard to read sarcasm on the internet.

greta_garbo January 6 2014, 16:21:27 UTC

God, no. That probably the worst title I've ever thought of.

Did you have to go into work today?

fangirl_101 January 6 2014, 16:58:09 UTC

No if it's a level red the office is closed. There's a Teen Wolf marathon on right now and I'm all over that shit.

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fangirl_101 January 6 2014, 16:08:30 UTC

Thanks so much! Those are my favorite lines too! I've had them in the back of my mind for a while now so I was excited to use them. It makes no sense, just like Chang! It breaks my heart how Troy and Britta ended last season. I like to think there are still feelings there. Hopefully Harmon will get them back together or at least hint at it. Thanks for reading!!