Dancing amongst the daffodils P9 (*UPDATED)

[miku247]

Title: Dancing amongst the daffodils
Pairing: 2min
Chap: 8
Disclaimer/rating: Shinee is not mine; Probably PG 13?
Summary: Shunned by his family and cursed to forever remain a shadow of his twin brother, Minho has long given up on life, love and the world in general. Out of the spur of the moment, Minho undertakes a drink driving suicidal act. But what

Comments

[gyustine]

Who's jonghyun ?
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[miku247]

Jonghyun is the lead vocalist in the band SHINee ^^. His a new character in this fic. hope that helps ^^

[mina_shine]

It was just today, that I have started to read your story. I love it I really do! But it's just in this chapter here, that I'm really gettin confusend~ What is the first sequence talking about? Or rather when is it happening and wth is Jinki talking to? I just don't get it~ :'D Yeeah, well, but maybe it's just me being retarded :D

I'm sorry that I have to talk about my confusion in the first comment I'M giving to you, because there is soo much positive to say and I hope you don't see this here as in insult :'D

XOXO :]

[miku247]

No, I’m definitely not insulted! Hihi :D Thank u for pointing out the confusion of the 1st part of this chap. tbh, when I wrote it, I wasn’t sure about that part either (the chap was written pretty much in a rush ^^;;. I tried ^^). I came back and made the scene a bit longer. I hope this is more understandable ^^. But basically, Onew is talking to an unknown character and it seems that there is more to onew then what he have told minho (n it’s in onew’s pov). I really like it when people express how they feel n enjoy reading people’s comments so feel free to ask me any further queries. hope to be hearing more from u :).

[mina_shine]

Oh my gooooosh~! It's njust now, that I found out, that you rewrote the part!! And let me tell ya, it's AWESOME! ^___^
It really is! Now everything makes more sense and now I finally got your intention.. :D Before, you(or well at least I) could not figure out, that there is another mission Onew has to complete but yeah, now I got it! :D :D And ooooh my gooooosh! This is just gettin so exciting! I love this twist! Because i never expected something like that and now.. I got even more curious about your story! I hope you continue soon, because this here.. is pretty well! Srsly, I was kind of disappointed with the 2Min fandom because there so many authors who are some kind of delusional fangirls without some real writing skills. But you DEFINITELY have that, so please make me happy and just don't stop writing this :]

[lovelyrazel]

ohmy, the beginning- it literally sent shiver up my spine ^-^ hha, creepy but i liked it.

omoo, jonghyunnie stop taking minnie from minho ! they need to be togetherrrr ~

♥
loved dis (:

[miku247]

hihi, thnk u :D

[miku247]

oh, btw, i changed the 1st few paragraphs of this chap if u're interested in reading. thnks again ^^.