Camera Shy 2/18

[mikssi]

Title: Camera Shy 2/18
Pairing: Jongkey, side Onho
Length: 75k words total
Rating: PG15-NC17
Genre: romance, humor, friendship, smut. yeah.
Summary: Jonghyun's life consists of school, webcam chatting with his best friend, Minho, who he's never seen in person, and bothering his roommate, Jinki, about everything under the sun. When Minho sends Jonghyun a

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[fluffalo95]

spot!

[fluffalo95]

"Oh, it's you Jonghyun." Jinki looked infinitely relieved, shoulders relieving of tension. "Sorry, I didn't recognize you." this is great. onew's already gonna be one of the best characters here, easily
you took about seven hours to shower this morning aww, poor jonghyun. so affected by key
"Did you see Minho's new video?" Jonghyun tried to keep his eagerness subdued; his goal was met only with help from his fatigue. Everything he said sounded dull and mildly uninterested. hmm. interesting tactic, jonghyun. cleverly written too
so impartial that it made Jonghyun's head hurt yeah, mine too

and let out a quiet whimper of pain
"You okay?" Jinki noted his short struggle with it. this just made me laugh so hard. i think i may like onew and jonghyun's dynamic just as much or more than jonghyun and minho's
"And I quote…" Minho cleared his throat dramatically. "'A+ jerk off material.'" somehow, i want key to see this.
It was a waste of his time and his gasoline. ikr? hate that :/

They didn't look like high school students at all to Jonghyun

[eyesofdeathe]

Minho, always the downer (always the cockblock too but shh)~
Jjong is getting closer now, and his fanboying over Key was hilarious xD
Onew also needs to give it a chance~ c'mon kinki Jinki, you now you want to love the frog.

Loved this one too <3
Forever your biggest fan :)

[greasetastic_x]

SPOT

[greasetastic_x]

Whoa I did not expect that. Jonghyun should have spoken to him, the idiot.
I really really adore the Minho's character in this so far.
Wow there are so many things I wanna say about this chapter but I can't form any sentences about it.

[professwhore]

I was just thinking "God I wish there was another chapter of this, the opening was sooo hot."

And then I suddenly get an email alert, like, two minutes later?!?
I reckon we have a secret psychic connection ;)

Ahhh, Jjong saw Key but they didn't speak?! And he wasn't wearing tight pants either (lol if that was the way Jjong could identify Key "I know that ass anywhere!")
I'm hoping Jjongie can see Key's face up close soon. And then he'll see those beautiful lips finally.

Anyway, this was great and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

[dino_whoar]

This chapter was perfect Kat. I love Jonghyun's failure at matchmaking and his bluntness with Jinki and his excitement when he thought he saw Key. It was all so perfectly him and it was great. Minho again was spot on. I think he's going to be my favorite character in this because he is just so damned perfect it hurts ;w; Jinki is great too but I kind of got confused when you mentioned the 5 year age gap. Did you mean between him and jonghyun or him and minho? And if it's him in Jonghyun, is Jinki still in college?
Thank you for updating so quickly; can't wait for Wednesday!