[Fic] Jealousy - PoT, ShishiTori, 19/21

[miko_no_da]

Title: Jealousy
Series: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: ShishiTori, Tori/?
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: chapter = 5866 fic so far = 82,390 (I have officially reached novel length. >.<)
Summary: Sometimes you don't appreciate the value of what you've got, until you don't have it any more.

Comments

[flyingmachine]

FIRST COMMENT YAY!

just... <3s to Jirou. *___* SO MANY <3s. and much anticipation for the last chapter!! :D

[miko_no_da]

*laughs* You know, I did not have a Jirou-muse when I started writing this.

I also did not have a Shishido-muse, and I was only borrowing chichiri_no_da's Atobe-muse.

Now I have half of Hyoutei in my head. *sighs* But I love Jirou too. ^___^

[flyingmachine]

ahh~ the great things fic-writing does... like cram your mind full of muses. XD! they're happily delighted to stay in your head!

though i'm jealous~ i want the pretty Hyoutei boys to do nice things to each other in my head too. :DDD (so if i return to the land of writing, i blame you <3)

[padfut_n_prongs]

*tackleglomps jirou ad gives him enough sugar to keep him awake for days*

your jirou-muse is lovingly devious! >=D i love him!

and that's all your getting for a coherent(sp) comment have you guessed yet that i'm a terrible speller?

*tackeglomp you and gives you cookies*

[miko_no_da]

ack! Don't do that! I'm the one who'll have to deal with a hyperactive muse. T_T At least I don't need him for the last chapter. Maybe he can keep Atobe-muse occupied and out of trouble.

[padfut_n_prongs]

o__O but is ore-sama's stamina that good?

T__T i can't believe it's come down tot he last chapter already

[cephy]

*chapter love* Loved the banter among the former team, loved Jirou to bits, loved the dinner scene. Huzzah!

Oh, and the part about Atobe being on ball-duty? WAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! I simply have to snicker at the thought of him doing menial labour. XD

[miko_no_da]

*snickers* I know, the image makes me laugh every time I think about it. But he would have to! Poor little freshie!Atobe. *giggles*

[jynx]

*takes a deep breath, not caring that roomie is on the phone*

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*ahem* I'm done now. *waits for Sunday anxiously*

[miko_no_da]

*giggles and glomps*

[jynx]

*cuddles* Loves you! *snuggle*

...yeah. Neko!Ryou's being a pain. *watches LOTR instead* X3

[anonymous]

I'm so stupid. I totally forgot about the different times for different countries. Yesterday was a Saturday in Australia and I spend the whole day checking for an update, and I mean like every ten minutes! I gave up about ten at night, and when I woke up, yay! and update on Sunday!!! *sighs* me so stupid.

Anyway, this chapter was definitely worth waiting for. I know that definitely Mukahi was being kicked under the table by Atobe and Jiroh. Poor boy, to have to miss out on such a wonderful opportunity. ^_^

I wonder how Shishido managed to keep up the banter when he was being pressed up so deliciously by Ohtori. lol.

I love the way you've written Jiroh and I look forward to reading the final chapter.

pix

[miko_no_da]

OH NO! o.O I guess I should have specified 'Saturday in North America'. *petpets* I'm glad it was worth waiting for! *laughs*

I think Shishido probably just put his mouth on autopilot and hoped for the best. Which is probably why Mukahi had to be kicked so many times. *snickers*