[Fic] Jealousy - PoT, ShishiTori, 18/21

[miko_no_da]

Title: Jealousy
Series: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: ShishiTori, Tori/?
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: chapter = 5047 fic so far = 76,524
Summary: Sometimes you don't appreciate the value of what you've got, until you don't have it any more.

Comments

[shini_tenshi]

WOOT!

Ohtori finally throws off that excess baggage. It makes me so proud XD
And Shishido gets props for actually not hitting Amano, just threatening him.... If I was Ohtori though, I would've just stood back and let Shishido beat the hell out of him... and yes, I know that's evil (all my friends tell me that).

[miko_no_da]

I think Ohtori should get the props for that, not Shishido... if Ohtori hadn't been hanging on he would have hit him. ^_^

[shini_tenshi]

Yeah, but think about it. If Shishido had truly wanted to, he could've pulled out of Ohtori's hold. Ohtori gets props for ending it, but of course he didn't end it soon enough. What if Amano turns into a freaky stalker because Ohtori slept with him and Amano wants to be his "ONLY".
Personally, I think Shishido should've got one lick in... but that's just me ^^

[kendarath]

yeyz! *hearts you so very much*
that's just- just- just- *swoons over arm of chair*

*waits excitedly for next chapter*

[miko_no_da]

*laughs* What are you going to do when there's no more chapters to wait for?

[kendarath]

*shifty eyes* uuuh.... stalk you until you write something new?

[padfut_n_prongs]

O_O?! OMG, LOVE! *__* *turns caps lock off*

you're muses get cookies with either extra sugar or extra chocolate chips, which ever then attack first *slides the cookies towards them*

and you! *backs up to get a good running start and then tackleglomps you* this was the perfect wake up for me today *__* x__X and considering i went to bed at 8am (yay for insomnia T__T) and woke up at 1:50pm, what a wake up it was >_O;;

and! omg! ohtori calling him ryou was so good that i stopped cheering for bloodshed! o__O <3

i love you <3 *_* <3

[miko_no_da]

Shishido-muse: *reaches for the chocolate chip cookies, blinks, then slides the plate over to Ohtori so he can choose first*

Me: *pounces on the plate while they're still arguing about who gets to choose first and steals them all*

[jynx]

Just so you know, you put a fucking HUGE smile on my face. And now I think I'm crying like poor Ohtori! *cuddles both boys* Yeah, seeing you two get back is gonna be wonderful. *sappy smile*

...*pets Amano* You fucked up GOOD, pretty boy. I know how ya feel, but damn! Should know Ohtori well enough to know you were speaking taboo words.

Much love to the Miko.

[miko_no_da]

Good! You need a smile right now. *hugs*

[moffit]

FINALLY.

Amano wasn't all that bad a guy on his own I guess, but I much prefer Shishido being the one to kiss Ohtori. *dances*

[miko_no_da]

Me too. ^_^ Which is why this is a ShishiTori story after all. ^_^