[Fic] It's My Party... - Zombie Loan, Chika/Shito, 4/5

[miko_no_da]

Well, I finally figured out why there were so MANY typos and problems with the last two chapters I posted. I have two copies of this fic on my computer... the one I collated directly from our RP sessions, and the one that we each took a turn editing. Guess which one I've been C&Ping from. *facepalms

Comments

[elict]

Yes, Shito you stupid prick, there are people out there who will treat you as the human you are, if you only let them. Duh XD

I love it that you're dealing with happenings from the canon now. The two of you do such an awesome job with both of these boys, and I find it really fascinating to see how you interpret their reactions and actions in the actual series.

Looking forward to the final part, very much! ♥

[fyredancer]

Okay, this is excellent and I can understand what's going on, I think, even before I've seen the series. (But I can totally feel where series knowledge will make this more fleshed out and meaningful.)

Post next part soon plz!!! I'm anxious to see what's going to happen with Chika and Shito, emotionally, relationship wise... *is worried!* Chika seems the type to be dense, not realizing that Shito's refusal means something is bad wrong.

[fantasia0829]

I got a little confused in this chapter, actually, but then realized that you were adding in all those things that happened in canon. Kudos for that! :DDD

[hineninja]

Oh no, only one part left. I don't want it to ever end.

[kazura_uyurin]

Awww... I love the canon bits in this! ^.^ And the last part was so sweet~

Can't wait of the last chapter! And I hope I don't miss it this time... ^^"