[Fic] Illusion of Truth - D.Gray-man, Lavi/Kanda, 5/10+

[miko_no_da]

Whew! This chapter was hard to write, and they surprised me a couple of times. At least it's finally long enough for me to think of it as a 'proper chapter'. ;p

Comments

[sailorlight22]

Waaiii, I love it! lol, I'm so glad to have new Lavi/Kanda yumminess, it isn't funny.. But besides my fangirlishness, great work, Thank you so much for this wonderful creation!

[miko_no_da]

There can never be enough Lavi/Kanda yumminess in the world. *nods firmly*

[roughxdivide]

Hee~ Smut~ ♥ But aah~ I feel so sad for Lavi for some reason ;~; All tangled up in his Bookman role and not really knowing who he is or where he truly wants to be ;~; Poor boy, I hope he figures himself out soon.

[miko_no_da]

Lavi is very confused, poor thing. *pets him* It's hard to have two things you want badly which conflict utterly with each other.

[brightdreamer]

You are the master of the emotional roller-coaster, you know that? Brilliant as usual, smut was amazing and hot and angsty, and wow, I'm incoherently keysmashing to nayanroo in AIM right now. XD

Why do I get the feeling that this won't work as well as Kanda hopes it will? (Oh yeah, there's still at least 5 more chapters...)

[miko_no_da]

Heh, I'm not the type to take the easy way out and say that the sex fixes all and make that the end of the story. There's more to real life than that.

[brightdreamer]

Hell, in real life, sex usually causes more problems than it solves. XD Can't wait to see how this'll affect the boys here.

Oh hey, though, I did have a couple nitpicks I noticed upon re-reading.

1. Wasn't Kanda injured in his side by the Akuma first, before getting hit by the bullet?

That brought him in range of the claws again, and he took a raking hit down his side before he managed to push himself out of range and back to his feet.

Or did that heal fast enough that neither of them noticed it? (His clothes would be torn though, right?)

2. Every time you mention Kanda nipping at Lavi's ear, I always wonder if his earring gets in the way, but you don't talk about it. XD Just one of those little things I think about, I guess. He could pull on the earring with his teeth too, hmm?

[miko_no_da]

Earring. *facepalms* I forgot about the damn earring. You'd think I'd remember, considering the effort I went to in order to get earrings to cosplay Lavi. Thank you for reminding me.

And I think I'd forgotten about the earlier injury, too. *doublefacepalms* Thank you again. I'll fix it.

[adakie]

wooo~! dramatic, tense, smexy~! XD <3 <3 <3

[miko_no_da]

^__^ I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[jynx]

;o; this not going to turn out too good, is it? *protects the boys!*

[miko_no_da]

Just remember, I only write happy endings! *hugs*

[jynx]

yeah, thank gods for that. ;o;