Comments | miko_no_da: [Fic] Too Good To Be True

miko_no_da

[Fic] Too Good To Be True - FFVII, Zack/Cloud, 18/21

Dec 28, 2006 18:12

Wow, this is an incredibly emotionally charged chapter, and the next one will be even worse. I'm finding it difficult to write these parts, not because it's not coming to me but just for the sheer emotional stress of it. That's not something I usually have a problem with. It's a damn good THING I only write happy endings, because this could ( Read more... )

fandom: final fantasy vii, character: cloud strife, character: tifa lockheart, !story: too good to be true, character: zack fair

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gardensgnome December 29 2006, 02:45:40 UTC

Noooo cliffhanger of doom! But yay for more and for things happening and poor Tifa and Zack and I hope the kids got away okay.

*twitches* Please tell me you're posting more today *begs and grovels* Guess I'm gonna be stalking your lj very very closely...at least till I have to go to work.

miko_no_da December 29 2006, 21:21:01 UTC

I'd say 'yes, I'm posting more today', except you made this comment yesterday so that doesn't work. ^_^; But yes, more today.

artimusdin December 29 2006, 02:49:24 UTC

... I'd like my heart back now kthx. My soul you can keep, as you've thoroughly earned it by now, but I kinda need the heart in order to function and go to work.

miko_no_da December 29 2006, 21:21:30 UTC

I think it ran off with mine, to hide from this chapter. I'll let you know when I find it.

artimusdin December 29 2006, 22:29:01 UTC

... our hearts eloped together? ;________;

fyredancer December 29 2006, 02:50:57 UTC

Oh, god! The part ends here! *whimpers in helpless thrall*

miko_no_da December 29 2006, 21:22:33 UTC

Just think, this was actually supposed to be two separate chapters. Wouldn't it have been even more fun to have had one chapter end with Tifa spotting Zack, and then the next chapter end this way? *eg*

fyredancer December 30 2006, 07:14:04 UTC

NO, THAT WOULD BE EVIL.

But you already know that. *G*

ravyn_09 December 29 2006, 02:51:51 UTC

*wimbles*....I wanna know what happens. So do you think your going to meet your goal? You only have 4 days including today. Can you do it? *nudge nudge*

miko_no_da December 29 2006, 21:23:50 UTC

Wimbles? Is that a whimper and wibble at the same time? ^_^ I think I can still meet my goal. One chapter a day from now until the 31st. *is insane*

ravyn_09 December 30 2006, 01:47:22 UTC

...you got a problem with my word whibles? *pouts* It my new word...that I made up just now. Ya! thats what it was *shifty eyed* ...ya...

You can do it! Cuz I know I can! XP

miko_no_da December 30 2006, 04:02:13 UTC

No, I like it! I often use 'squeebles', which is squeeing and wibbling at the same time. ^_^

>.> Do I get a prize for meeting my goal? A sketch for the last chapter, maybe? *makes hopeful chibi eyes at you* There's this one particular scene... you'll know it when you see it. *grins* If I'm lucky maybe it'll inspire you again. I STILL go back and look at your first two pics when I need inspiration for this story, you know. Not to mention Jaren and Kale are still my desktop.

Damn you and your pretty pictures, anyway. You've addicted me!

yuenoclow December 29 2006, 02:55:33 UTC

Bloody fucking hell! Wahhh, you just *had* to go and leave it there! Shit!

miko_no_da December 29 2006, 21:24:29 UTC

*grins* Hey, I've been remarkably light on the cliffhangers in this story, really.

yuenoclow December 29 2006, 23:28:40 UTC

Yes, I know, but that has to be one of the most evil cliffhangers I've read yet. Yeesh!