[Fic] Too Good To Be True - FFVII, Zack/Cloud, 13/21+

[miko_no_da]

Not entirely happy with this chapter, but if I don't move past it I'll NEVER finish the damn story. Next chapter should be better, I've got a better idea of what I want to do with it and where it needs to go. Hopefully this isn't as lame as it feels like it is to me. >.< Anyway, since I AM looking forward to the next couple of chapters, with luck

Comments

[vasher]

YES.

[vasher]

Ok, proper comment:

HEE! I love the way Zack geeks out over the chocobo races and the Cloud-beating-Teioh.

*gives cookies and chocolate chocobos*

And also that they can talk about Sephiroth pre-megalomaniac tendencies without too much pain. ^^

And villa in Costa del Sol! How cool it that? Also, hopefully some... smoothing over of the Zack/Cloud residual awkwardness? like something that would deserve an NC-17.

[miko_no_da]

*laughs* Zack being a dork over the racing seems to be everyone's favourite moment. He's so cute when he does that, isn't he? ^_^

[elanor_pam]

Hey, don't feel bad XD I feel the same. Of course, the easiest way to include Zack would be... including Zack. You know.

[miko_no_da]

You're not an awful person for saying that! Believe me, I feel pretty bad that she's getting pushed aside like this. She deserves her happy ending, too.

[meiface]

You have no idea how excited I was to see this on my flist, heh. I was expecting not to see anything until after November at the very earliest, so this is a lovely surprise.

I like the chapter despite your misgivings - but then, I like everything you write so I am probably not your best judge. ^_~. I'm a sucker for Zack/Cloud development though, romantic or otherwise, so I liked this chapter a lot though it wasn't as action-packed as some of the previous. The different perspectives on Zack not touching Cloud were wonderful. ♥♥

And, oh Tifa. I like her so, so much. :D

[miko_no_da]

I had intended to post a chapter of this at least once a week, but... well, I'm not exactly doing very well with my NaNo wordcount, either, so we'll see.

[yuenoclow]

Heh, sorry Tifa, but us fangirls are *really* hoping something will happen between them in Costa del Sol. *grin*

[miko_no_da]

*laughs* Well, yeah. We are. Though I do feel bad for putting Tifa through all this. She deserves better.

[anotherxscene]

Wow. I was literally just talking about you and this fic to a friend, and you updated. I have some sort of weird ESP connection with this fanfic or something, I swear o__o~ It's not the first time it's happened either xD~

Anyway :O~ Do I sense some Zack/Cloud-ness coming up in their trip to Costa del Sol or are you just being horrible and teasing your readers again?? xDD~ I can't wait for more, I've been so deprived of this fic lately!!

[miko_no_da]

Tease my readers? Me? Never. I have no idea what you're talking about. *shoves notes under computer*