[Fic] Not So Bad After All - Tenipuri, Ohtori-centric

[miko_no_da]

First attempt at an entry for Ohtori's b-day contest at tori_shishi. I'm not sure I'm entirely happy with it, but I wanted to try doing something from before Ohtori and Shishido became attached at the hip

Comments

[forochel]

*squees*

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I find it hightly amusing that Bond's Korobushka swelled to its climax just as the match was ending.

[miko_no_da]

*laughs* I have no idea what that is, but it's always funny when music(?) matches something you're reading.

[almostfantastic]

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEDDDDD IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was awesome. It's so rare to see stories when they're not attached at the hip. Great job. And finally, you've written your first PoT fic of the year!!!!! =^_______^=

[miko_no_da]

Hee, I guess it is, isn't it? Hadn't thought of it that way. ^__^

[gekkonorondo]

I loved this. -grin-

Very well written, and just generally an enjoyable story. -nudges- You've done a good job, and I'm certainly looking forward to anything else that you may be writing in the future. <3

[miko_no_da]

I've got a Reno-fic coming up next as a reward to myself for finishing an old story, and then it's back to the AtoTori. *grins* More to come soon!

[gekkonorondo]

Oooh~ Reno. -grin- Where can this Reno fic be found? -bounces around you-

[miko_no_da]

In my head at the moment. *is desperate to make Reno shut UP for a while so she can concentrate on tenipuri again* See my to-do list in my journal. ^_^

[giving_ground]

Lovely story! :)

[miko_no_da]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

[flyingmachine]

:O You have no idea how much I flipped out when I saw this post. ♥!

But dear gods I've missed reading your writing. It's such a beautiful style and captures the images perfectly. ♥ ♥ And have I ever told you how much I absolutely adore your descriptions of playing tennis? Guuu~ :3 And theme was so great~ so original~ You don't see many SP pre-doubles fics. :D ♥ ♥

LOVE for your Ohtori!!

[miko_no_da]

*grins* We spent half an hour practicing serves in my tennis lesson today, which I suspect is where half of this came from. Ow my arm hurts. >.< But I started actually hitting targets, yay!

>.> And no, I do not mutter 'ikkyuu nyu kon' under my breath to help me get the timing on the serve right. Really. Honest. *got weird looks from her instructor*

[flyingmachine]

Yay! Oh man, that reminds me I should probably restart lessons. ♥ It's such a thrill. And no wonder~ :D Writing something you know makes it so much better!

Ahhaha~ I love you. XD <3