Standalone// Armi Della Famiglia

Apr 16, 2007 00:19

Title: Armi Della Famiglia
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Character: Gokudera
Rating: G
Notes: It's been far, far too long since I've done a simple drabble piece. Writing this felt good.

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fandom: katekyo hitman reborn, pairing: none

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picnicbird April 16 2007, 08:33:12 UTC
....Ahhgaahhhh... you've totally hooked me. It's not so often you find a fic like this, one that makes you go, "More! MORE!!" Even when it's appropriately, fittingly finished, and we all know what happens next, in your words it's just -- lovely. Such introspection -- BRAVO. ;_____; I love this.

Also, get back to me if better beta readers can't be found. XD I have little experience beta-reading, but I'd be happy to if you found there was no one else -- for a selfish reason, of course: your writing's absolutely lovely and I'd love to see more of it. :D :D :D

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picnicbird April 16 2007, 08:34:31 UTC
OH OH OH OH -- ONE MORE THING:

Character: MUKURO.

Topic: FRUITY.

GO!

>:D

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picnicbird April 16 2007, 08:39:47 UTC
WAIT. YOU DIDN'T WANT A BETA. YOU WANTED A BETA-LISTENER, for lack of better term. XD

I'd love to do that, too. XD (If you can't find better ones.) ....*spams you* sorry.

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mikken April 16 2007, 14:45:00 UTC
xDDD; Hahaha, sorry for not making that more clear. But yeeees. Do you have an email I can spam you with songs? (Only four! Plus rambling. xD) I'm mostly worried that the music I've chosen fits more towards, say, Part V of Jojo, which I'd been in the middle of reading at the time I chose them, rather than Reborn. Because Golden Whirlwind, while it also has mafia themes, is a lot darker than Reborn is as a whole.

And ooh, Mukuro and "fruity". I've got an idea for that. xDDD

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bloodyteaspoon April 16 2007, 17:38:31 UTC
Wow. So Gokudera. Oh my god. <33333333333333333333333333333333333

Fucking spectacular.

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mikken April 16 2007, 17:53:51 UTC
W-wah, thank you. .///.

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psycho_iceapple April 17 2007, 13:51:28 UTC
INTROSPECTIVE LIKE WHOA. You capture his viewpoint quite well. XD

Bloody brilliant, I tell ya. *thumbs up*

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mikken April 17 2007, 18:21:28 UTC
Th-thank you!

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pearljamz April 17 2007, 16:39:25 UTC
Reading this felt good, too!! XD (in response to your Notes section)

A good read indeed! ♥

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mikken April 17 2007, 18:18:06 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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theburningempty April 20 2007, 05:13:15 UTC
I really admire how you got into Gokudera's character and thoughts plus how you've woven his narrative to fit into canon so well~ I also like (how should I say this without gushing...) this drabble really polishes and gives Gokudera's character a developed shine. The little details like how he respects his explosives and unconsciously ties just about everything back to mafia business. So cute! C:

Er... hopefully I'm not too late for a prompt:
BIANCHI VS. MICROWAVE (and maybe throw in a barfing!Gokudera if the situation calls for him? That'd totally make my day)

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mikken April 22 2007, 06:04:05 UTC
Th-thank you, oh wow, that's some pretty high praise there. ^^;

....I could try? 8D;

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