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Hello, Sunshine [7/25]

Jul 03, 2010 17:43

Title: Hello, Sunshine
Spoilers: None, really. Maybe some throwbacks to the show in later chapters.
Rating: PG-13/ T
Pairings: Arthur/Gwen, Lancelot/Gwen, Merlin/Morgana
Genre: AU/Romance/Humor
Summary: By happenstance, Gwen comes across a job opportunity: be a nanny for Arthur Pendragon's son. It would have been great, if the child wasn't evil ( Read more... )

arthur/gwen, fanfiction, hello sunshine

Comments 14

javabreeze July 3 2010, 23:26:11 UTC

miki_hime1221 July 4 2010, 19:43:10 UTC

Thanks! They are getting closer, but when the actual moment comes, it has to feel right, and it didn't feel right in this chapter so I did an almost kiss instead!

Lying never yields good results, so I can't let Gwen completely get away with what she's done. I'll try to be nice to her though.

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miki_hime1221 July 4 2010, 19:44:30 UTC

Yay! Thanks! It was about time Mordred began to see the light. It's not a complete transformation, but he at least sees that violence against his nanny is wrong.

psyche_cuore July 4 2010, 13:48:35 UTC

Eee, I've been waiting for another update! :)

I'm still giggling a little over Gwen's discovery of Alvarr, such a great scene. Loved seeing Arthur and Gwen struggling to fight their attraction, and Mordred trusting Gwen a little more too. Bring on more long chapters!

miki_hime1221 July 4 2010, 19:45:43 UTC

I'll try to write longer chapters, but I feel this next one will probably only be around 5,000 words depending on what I have planned. We'll see.

Thanks for reading!

osept July 4 2010, 17:57:41 UTC

i really love it..
i hate lancelot/vivan.. he is so weird. and she is so rude.
i hopefully, mordred trust and love gwen.
i hope that next chapter gwen will kiss arthur.
i can't can't wait wait on next chpater..

miki_hime1221 July 4 2010, 21:06:43 UTC

Tee hee. I actually like Vivian! And Lancelot before he became evil! But I guess that means you feel sorry for Gwen, whose arguably the main character anyway.

Kiss...hmmm. Well, they're going to have to keep their distance a little bit next chapter for obvious reasons, but I'll definitely give you a couple cute moments because I can't help myself!

Thanks for reading!

hmsharmony July 7 2010, 03:25:02 UTC

Another fantastic installment! And SO many brownie points for including an AVPM shoutout. &hearts I'm so excited for Gwen and Mordred's plan of doom! Looks to be epic. <3

miki_hime1221 July 8 2010, 06:49:43 UTC

Thanks! I love AVPM and your icon. Sometimes I forget how many people have watched it. It's amazing! And I had lots of fun writing the plan so I hope you'll enjoy reading about it!

hmsharmony July 8 2010, 18:07:01 UTC

I always have a little mini squee session when I discover someone else adores AVPM (even though it's so well-known by now XD). That musical owns my heart. &hearts (SO EXCITED FOR THE SEQUEL. JULY 22!!)

I am SURE that I will enjoy reading about the plan. Anything involving Mordred is automatically a win in your universe!