Comments | mike_torudo: blue sky fading

mike_torudo

blue sky fading

Jul 10, 2007 16:00

the piece below I just recently started and I need constructive criticism

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Comments 5

j_isfour_jackie July 10 2007, 20:20:35 UTC

not working. i wanna see em.

mike_torudo July 10 2007, 20:26:33 UTC

they should work now

j_isfour_jackie July 11 2007, 07:29:28 UTC

i like the background of the first a lot.

i think the hand on the left is a lot more interesting than the one on the right, it's a lot more dynamic. i think it would be good to have a little more detail in the hands also, like more three dimensional. i don't know how you would do that though, like if you wanted to stick with the same materials you could use different colored/different sizes of tips of sharpies, or like different colored papers... maybe darker.

i like the first picture. the composition is nice, how both girls are looking at the camera, and how they are both in the lower left, and how the top and bottom are divided by the different kinds of negative space.

the_lone_cheese July 10 2007, 22:41:57 UTC

the first one needs something more in the back ground, some motion. its a little boring in the background. i love the collage in the hands though.

sweetpotato0120 July 11 2007, 02:26:31 UTC

The bottom hand is looking good. The top hand may need a bit more detail. I can't really tell if it's the palm or back of the hand. Maybe do just a insy bit more with the background. What's the peice trying to portray?
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