Shards Of Butterfly Wings

[jyotsu]

.Shards Of Butterfly Wings
.Homin, angst/crack/fluff
.they met in high school
A/N. this is something i've been working about from around december-january, and even my beta got sick of waiting for the end of this piece of crap. this would be my first ever full-blown yunjea debut, and i'm still not proud of it. but anyways, enjoy!

Comments

[nivani]

um, so I'm first...

[nivani]

I can't believe I haven't commented on any of your fics before or have I? o-O

anyway, the beginning was so adorable that I wasn't at all ready for the heartbreak that followed and even with the happy ending I still don't like Yunho. the heart-in-a-jar motive is brilliant and what exactly it is that you don't like about this piece of awesome?

random, but I like the format ♥
there were a few tense slips, but I'm too sleepy to go back and list them sorry XD

[jyotsu]

i don't think you have. :D

aww, i hope you don't hold any grudges on the poor guy. he's just a man in love, after all xD thank you, i'm glad you liked the idea! :D

tense slips is exactly why i don't like it bb. that and a lot of other things.

lol spoken like a true wedded couple. ;D

[nivani]

that's pretty unthinkable of me since I've been stalking you even when you still were a girl 8D

even in love, I hate dishonest people and playing Jaejoong like he did, I would not trust him again. if they lie for you they will lie to you~ Changmin's too good for him imo, this should have totally ended up in jaemin XDDD

but it was nothing serious! I need more prove, what are those 'other things' ?

I'm not sure how should I understand that? XD

[jyotsu]

awww, thank you very much! :D i feel honored.

that's a nice way to sum it! i should put that up somewhere xD

he might've known somewhere along the way. ;D

[jyotsu]

lmao i like complications. it spices up life. :D

thank you so much!

[pavarian]

oh that was really nice!!! i loved the ideas behind it, and the glass jar motif throughout the entire story. spotted a few grammar errors but i'm super picky so ignore me =) =) =)

i still loved the story though!!! really really loved it =)

[pavarian]

ps. is that a tom felton/draco malfoy icon i see?? <3 <3 <3 lol

[jyotsu]

thank you very much! yes the grammar errors are hard to find, and reading the story itself makes me cry again so i just leave it there and hated it. :D

yes it is! your icons are really pretty... :D i like.

[pavarian]

haha i love that tom felton photoshoot <3 he's my fave character!!!! thanks re. icons! i only made the long-legged one though.. ^^;

[yue_akuma]

OMG.

Awesomeness.

[jyotsu]

UGH THX.