[cm fic] Make Your Own, Reid/Hotch, Teen.

Sep 10, 2007 17:45

Title: Make Your Own.
Pairing: Reid/Hotch
Rating: Teen.
AN: 423 words.

It sits perched on Reid’s shaky hand and he says, “Have it, take it,” and nothing else. )

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asinful September 10 2007, 10:51:28 UTC
Oh, Lisa. It's so pretty. Paper cranes. I realised that they were paper cranes pretty quickly actually. Yes, behold my deduction skills. :)

Hotch doesn’t say, okay, or don’t, even if he wants to.

Oh. Just oh.

Gideon pushes it gently to Hotch as he walks by. “Let me rephrase that. I don’t want it.”

How is it that you manage to have Gideon's whole character in that one sentence?

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mijmeraar September 12 2007, 09:41:03 UTC
you so clever ;)

and thank you SO much for saying that about Gideon because. Yeah. He's the kinda character you could rip your hair out trying to get right and then you later realise you were just trying too damn hard. You know the type?

thanks for the lovely feedback, it means so much ♥

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nebula99 September 10 2007, 12:06:04 UTC
This is gorgeous. So much is said in so few words. I hope you write more.

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mijmeraar September 12 2007, 09:41:41 UTC
thank you very much! i hope I do too ;)

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anonymous September 10 2007, 13:31:36 UTC
"Red like lust, or love, or other words that make you bleed."

Wow. That's all I can say. You've captured it all with such simple words. I love it.

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mijmeraar September 12 2007, 09:42:09 UTC
i am a bit of a simpleton ;) thanks very much for reading.

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decarnin September 11 2007, 10:44:53 UTC
You're back! Yay!

This is so interesting, I only wish there were more. Not more birds, I mean, just more of the yummy filling. :-)

But from you, we take what we can get and are thankful for it. My fave is the one where they kiss, I think. Although I liked the abandoned one on the conference table too. And "I can't seem to stop." :-)

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mijmeraar September 12 2007, 09:43:34 UTC
It has been a while, hasn't it?

this was going to be EPIC fic and then I decided I wanted it to be quiet which meant not a lot of Reid talking. 'cause Reid likes to talk, y'know.

your feedback is so very lovely, thank you :D

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dragonladyk September 12 2007, 05:15:18 UTC
You and the trippy fics. ^^;; Your stream-of-consciousness style is lovely.

DragonLady

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mijmeraar September 12 2007, 09:44:19 UTC
oh man, this one really is crazy isn't it?

thanks so much for reading :)

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