@Fandom opinion seems to be that Jensen/Dean gets more attention than Jared/Sam. I don’t know whether it’s my bias talking, but I’ve always thought it was the other way around. Not heaps so, but just. Like
paradise_city once pointed out, Jared has a generic look. He’s a beautiful guy but he sort of fits quota. In RL whenever I mention the boys the first
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Nah I don't think you go overboard with commas.
I was in the same situation recently; some people just write really long sentences, and it seems better to break them up than leave it rambling.
So yes I'm pro-commas :)
Good luck with the MRI.
LOL I do that with the TV too, it's fun.
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I have not noticed excessive comma usage - but that must mean that when I read your fic, it just flows. Or that I like commas too.
Good luck with the drive and the fic and EEEE BIYS. Lol, reciting the pledge - that is GOLDEN.
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aaargh the fic. i keep changing it and staying awake all night thinking about it. it's scary.
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Good luck with your MRI! <3
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thanks :D
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Best of luck with the MRI! I hope it shows something useful. Also treatable, because useful without being treatable sucks.
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it's funny how, with fic, you as the writer see it/read it differently to the audience. so i was just curious to know if my own way of reading was affecting the outcome.
thanks for the best wishes. i'll know the results very soon.
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I don't think you overuse commas. Plus I tend to abuse hyphens in my writiing, so who am I to judge. You can just claim that it's part of your unique writing style. :*
Good luck with the MRI. I have a very vague idea about what it entails - mostly from what I've seen on 'House' - but my dad had to get it done some time ago and it was bloody expensive.
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i loooove hyphens, FYI.
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