Comments | mijmeraar: [cm fic] try not to linger, M/R H/R, mild R.

mijmeraar

[cm fic] try not to linger, M/R H/R, mild R.

Jun 28, 2007 22:13

Title: try not to linger.
Pairing: Morgan/Reid, Hotch/Reid unrequited.
Rating: mild R.
AN: I’m not sure about this one. Feedback=love.

( Reid would have had his bag over his shoulder, and his bottom lip caught in his mouth. Morgan would have stepped up, cautious, put a hand at his neck and barely there. He would have muttered, “You got it figured out, genius?” and Reid would have blushed ten kinds of red. )

cm fic

Comments 45

decarnin June 28 2007, 13:12:18 UTC

Good lord, Thomas *Fuller*? And J.K. Rowling... Only in fandom.

to feel Reid succumb to him, and dissolve under his touch.

hummina...

You had thought Reid some Virgin Mary. You had thought wrong.

Oh, Hotch, I can relate.

Their cups are identical. So are the bags under their eyes

Adorable.

I don't really like sad stories most of the time, I feel bad for Hotch. :-( But I love the originality of some of your lines, the way you come at things. Now just edge Hotch closer and have Reid turn around and notice him... that's it... there you go...

:-) Anyway I'll await your happy ending stories with continued interest, and bravely wince my way through the sad parts.

mijmeraar June 30 2007, 11:13:10 UTC

Good lord, Thomas *Fuller*? And J.K. Rowling... Only in fandom.

hahaha. the place to be.

thank you so much for your feedback, i really appreciate it. i'm not sure how I'd go about writing non-angsty Reid/Hotch, but I can always try ;)

decarnin July 1 2007, 01:17:58 UTC

i'm not sure how I'd go about writing non-angsty Reid/Hotch, but I can always try ;)

O do! I mean, not necessarily non-angsty all the way through, you know, I'm all for angst, I just like the happy resolution. :-) But I'd read yours anyway, happy or no. I'm still reeling from "Leave a Mark".

kevlarhearts June 28 2007, 13:44:28 UTC

unrequited love, be still my beating heart.

i really like this one. it's honest and realistic and no one goes on a murderous rampage!

mijmeraar June 30 2007, 11:14:25 UTC

haha, yeah, I kind of thought tracking murderers might not go well with the 'falling in love' arc of the story. i'm glad you liked it, thanks for the comments :)

boho_beata June 28 2007, 14:19:51 UTC

This was touching, really it was. It made me sober up from my drowsy state... and then I read kevlarhearts' comment and I cracked up.

Good job :)

mijmeraar June 30 2007, 11:15:55 UTC

i'm so glad you could connect with it. i was worried [still am a little] that it moved too quickly. thansk so much for reading, and commenting.

fair_vatican June 28 2007, 14:27:54 UTC

:D

i don't think i read a fic quite like yours.
i really like it.great job!

mijmeraar June 30 2007, 11:16:35 UTC

thank you very much :D

fireness June 28 2007, 14:54:42 UTC

I'm not one much for second person narration, but I think you did a good job of writing this fic. =)

mijmeraar June 30 2007, 11:17:16 UTC

I'm glad the POV didn't ruin it for you. thanks so much for reading it, regardless :D