Comments | mijan: Fic: "The Needs of the Few" (16/23)

mijan

Fic: "The Needs of the Few" (16/23)

Mar 17, 2013 18:21

Title: "The Needs of the Few"
Canon characters/Pairing(s): Kirk & McCoy, Pike, Finney
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,068 for Chaper 16
Warnings: Foul language, political situations, military stuff.
Summary: As cadets on a summer internship, Kirk and McCoy are supposed to keep their eyes open and their mouths shut. As far as Bones is concerned, that’s ( Read more... )

academy series, fanfic, rating: pg-13, star trek, aos, tnotf

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mijan February 23 2013, 05:10:16 UTC

Thank you! Next chapter, coming right up!

kayenem February 18 2013, 06:50:39 UTC

Another great chapter! Can't wait for your next update.

mijan February 23 2013, 05:10:38 UTC

Thanks! Next update should be up tonight. :)

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mijan February 23 2013, 05:11:10 UTC

LOL - "middle of someone's lung" just seemed like something McCoy would say. I have so much fun writing his dialogue.

More story, coming right up!

alaria February 18 2013, 12:40:33 UTC

This is so suspensful and exciting :) I find it interesting how they are both struggling with authority and how to handle the "fight" between doing as they are told and doing what they think they should do and the consequences of that choice and who's responsibility those consequences are.

mijan February 23 2013, 05:11:57 UTC

I made some careful decisions about how I wanted to balance their interaction with authority figures in this story. It plays into how I see them developing towards the events in the Narada incident.

Anyway, more fic is on its way!

sickbay23 February 18 2013, 20:45:26 UTC

Wow two chapters in such a short time, the tension goes higher and higher, looking forward for the next chapter :)

mijan February 23 2013, 05:12:13 UTC

Next chapter? Your wish is my command!