Comments | mijan: Fic: "The Needs of the Few" (7/23)

mijan

Fic: "The Needs of the Few" (7/23)

Sep 22, 2012 15:56

Title: "The Needs of the Few"
Canon characters/Pairing(s): Kirk & McCoy, Pike, Finney
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6,562 for chapter 7
Warnings: Foul language, political situations, military stuff.
Summary: As cadets on a summer internship, Kirk and McCoy are supposed to keep their eyes open and their mouths shut. As far as Bones is concerned, that’s ( Read more... )

academy series, fanfic, rating: pg-13, star trek, tnotf

Comments 4

alaria September 23 2012, 10:43:05 UTC

Jim is so sweet taking care of Bones in a way that shows how well they know each other. I also wonder for how long Jim will be able to keep up this whole "don't investigate" idea :) I was happy to see another chapter of this posted - and not disappointed!

rogueangel1998 September 24 2012, 03:07:18 UTC

Becareful what you wish for. Bones might have wanted Jim to look before leaping in the past - but when it really happens? It's just not Jim and BOnes knows it.

And I loved how Jim knew what Bones needed - even brought him his bathrobe and straightened his boots! Ahhhhh...

RA

sickbay23 September 24 2012, 12:26:56 UTC

Another quite interesting chapter, what's wrong with Dr. Brex, it seems Bones is the only one who is concerned and wants to know what's wrong. It's very sweet how Jim takes care of Bones. But they both have to be careful, they knew from the past experience, what all can happen. Great writing :)

lap_otter October 26 2012, 04:57:35 UTC

“Come on, Bones. Pick up the comm.”
To Chapter 8
Couple of funny html tags in this one.

I don't get why Jim didn't mention what he found when he found it. Even if he thinks Lieutenant Rahman will find the same thing he found, what's the point of pretending he didn't find it? Did I miss something?