Stories like this make me wish I was capable of leaving more constructive criticism than: This entire thing was amazing! but that's all I've got, so...
Oh my god. I just. Ugh. Speechless over here. This fic was beyond amazing. There was no automatic fix it to their lives and you showed that there were good times along with all the bad that they have to overcome. The last section was killer. I'm sure I could write more, but the gist of it all is: I loved reading this so much. And I'm sure I'll be reading this again ♥
Thank you! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the struggles the boys went through (I'm such an angsty whore! XD) I have to make the boys suffer a little bit ;) Thank you for leaving such lovely feedback ♥
In the end I printed it out because my stupid pain in the arse eyes could take on paper. AND I JUST COULDN'T WAIT TO READ *g* So I was snuggled up in bed last night and read your wonderful tale. It's perfect and so lovely and beautiful and gorgeous! ♥♥♥
And the last line ♥
Thank your for this wonderful story :)
(Also, I am so happy you didn't make Agravaine a bad character even if we never actually met him and only heard about him through Arthur.)
AWWW HUN!!! *squishes* bless you for printing out this whole damn thing!! (I know it must have been so many pages! :S )
I'm happy your eyes could take it and that you enjoyed it ♥ I know, I wish I could have delved into Arthur's history more. I like to think Agravaine was good deep down and Morgana just led him astray ;)
Wow, I loved this fic very very much. I felt all along so in tune with it.
The end was exactly how I was imagining it reading the fic and it's kind of weird because when thinking about what Uther might be doing now when Arthur told his story, it was exactly what you described in that very last part.
It's not that it was predictable or anything but just that I felt so connected with it...
I cried a lot in the beginning and their various aches made me ache too and it all felt very real.
Aww thank you so much for leaving such wonderful feedback. I'm glad to hear you felt connected to the story. That's really all I could hope for when setting out to write this - to make it believable. ♥
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That last line is lovely.
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So beautiful and well-written.
I went it excited for this particularly idea, and it became so much more along the way.
And that last line was perfect.
Thank you so much for writing this, it has made my night.
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And the last line ♥
Thank your for this wonderful story :)
(Also, I am so happy you didn't make Agravaine a bad character even if we never actually met him and only heard about him through Arthur.)
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I'm happy your eyes could take it and that you enjoyed it ♥ I know, I wish I could have delved into Arthur's history more. I like to think Agravaine was good deep down and Morgana just led him astray ;)
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The end was exactly how I was imagining it reading the fic and it's kind of weird because when thinking about what Uther might be doing now when Arthur told his story, it was exactly what you described in that very last part.
It's not that it was predictable or anything but just that I felt so connected with it...
I cried a lot in the beginning and their various aches made me ache too and it all felt very real.
Yes, it was just perfect.
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