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devilishangel03 August 31 2011, 02:40:11 UTC
i just finished reading this and i am blown away by your talent. you had me laughing, crying, fearful for the boys, mad at both of them, well i'm sure you get it a range of emotions. lol. this was beautiful to read. very detailed and poignant at times. brilliant job. and the art was amazing.

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mightypretty September 4 2011, 16:14:28 UTC
Oh wow, really thank you ever so much for your kind words and for jumping on this fic so quickly after it was posted! ♥ I'm glad the story was able to take you through a range of emotions... I'm so glad you enjoyed it and yeah viennajones did a wonderful job on the arts!
Thanks once again hun

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paradox18 August 31 2011, 10:41:05 UTC
This was just so lovely, heartbreaking in parts but I'm glad Merlin and Arthur made it. It was wonderful

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mightypretty September 4 2011, 16:16:38 UTC
Thank you so much! Yeah I kinda dragged the boys through a lot so had to give them a happy ending :)

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cruentum August 31 2011, 11:09:14 UTC
Great story. Some real low lows there in between for the characters. I loved your choice of Merlin drawing the line when Arthur lied to him, then lied to him again. Loved the journey of that group of friends to that point in their lives, too, that was pretty awesome to read. Thanks for this one, it was awesome.

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mightypretty September 4 2011, 16:24:02 UTC
Thanks Nick, I'm so glad you enjoyed it and found that the little group of friends worked. I really wanted the fact that Arthur lied not once but twice to Merlin to be a sort of breaking point for him, I'm happy you picked up on that! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment :)

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chaosmaka August 31 2011, 11:14:10 UTC
OMG. Ok... I need to breathe... This was absolutely brilliant! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS, OK? ♥ Probs one of the very best BB's I read this year!

I loved their little group of friends. And all the emotions and... it was heartbreaking but yet so very hopeful and fresh. They both needed each other so much. I loved the fact that Merlin didn't just give in and Arthur had to fight his trust back. And OMG Hunith. You broke me, bb. But you made it all up in the end. SO MUCH LOVE.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing!! ♥♥♥

Oh crap I forgot all these kisses on the wrists KILLED ME! SO BEAUTIFUL ♥

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mightypretty September 4 2011, 16:30:00 UTC
LOVE, YOU ARE MAKING ME BLUSH! FOR REALS! You are seriously too damn kind. I am so happy you enjoyed it so much and found that it had a kind of 'hopeful' feel to it. That's what I was really trying to get across so I'm really glad you found that. God, writing the whole Hunith aspect was so damn hard, but I felt it needed to happen to justify them getting off the estate -- I couldn't not give those boys a happy ending ;) like you said they needed each other so much!

But really, thank YOU for leaving such wonderful wonderful feedback and rec-ing this out to your flist too. I feel incredibly blessed - thank you *hugs*

and oh yeah can you tell I have a kink for wrist kisses?!! mwahahaa! lol

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chaosmaka September 4 2011, 17:17:40 UTC
HEHE. MISSION: ACCOMPLISHED XD Oh you, you have no idea I think I only talked about your fic the last days :D Whenever someone asked what to read first I always tell them about yours. IDEK it really got under my skin. Love it!!

I can tell and I'm happy you do because these kisses made me all gaga and awwwwww ♥♥

Thanks again bb, keep up the good work ♥

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ronsoftie August 31 2011, 17:48:09 UTC
Gosh, you made me sob so hard, I had to stop reading because I couldn't see my screen anymore. And then I had calmed down and then Merlin finds Hunith note and the tears started again.

This was so wonderful to read, and so heartbreaking to read as well! Oh all the angst, but you made it all better in the end, and it was gorgeous ♥♥

I loved their group of friends, and the role you gave Morgana :D

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this lovely tale ♥

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mightypretty September 4 2011, 16:33:56 UTC
Oh sweetie, I'd never like to think I've made people cry, but I suppose in this context I take it as a huge compliment!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for such lovely feedback; I know the angst was layered on but I'm glad you enjoyed it and of course the boys had to get a happy ending ;)

Hee! I'm happy you liked Morgana's role! I really wanted to include her in this verse in someway and it just seemed to fit quite nicely, so I'm happy you liked that too!

Thank YOU for reading and commenting! *hugs*

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