"Pretend We're Married", a Dollhouse fanfiction

[mightyfastpig]

Title: Pretend We're Married
Fandom: Dollhouse
Author: Mighty Fast Pig
Rating: R for language and sexual content
Word Count: 5874
Spoilers: Up to 1.09 "Needs"
Author’s Note: The main story takes place before 1.06 "Man on the Street"
Disclaimer: Dollhouse Etc. owned by Joss Whedon and FOX. "Hotel California" lyrics written by Don Felder, Glenn Frey, Don

Comments

[otahyoni]

Oh, I really like how you did that, taking them from Active-state to various engagements and finally to that scene in "Needs." Very nice!

[lavastar]

Awww, that was so adorable! I love how you got both Victor/Sierra and Sierra/Echo in there, and the Topher/Ivy, and just the little details like the song and the stickers.

Great job!

[rodlox]

Sierra and Victor are so very cute together, both as Actives and as Dolls, and you captured that superbly.

Leung's a nice name. I like Ivy.

may I beg you for a sequel to this lovely story?
(only without the mean guy)

[spiralleds]

Nicely done. You really captured the dynamic of Sierra/Victor - as their dollselves and imprints, not to mention the creepy nature of the Dollhouse and its assignments.

I was really feeling for poor Victor when he felt rejected by Sierra. I find myself squeeing like Ivy over their innocent doll love (even knowing they aren't their full, original selves).