[fic: kink meme deanon] Luckiest Woman in the World

[miezen]

Title: Luckiest Woman in the World
Author: miezenCharacter(s) or Pairing(s): Austria/Hungary/fem!Austria

Comments

[rosetteroulette]

HNNG. This was hot. And...jlka;jdka;....I really loved it. *q*

And Elizaveta with the strap-on and Roderich with the breast-caressing...♥

[miezen]

♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it~

...Somehow I was kind of expecting you to be the first person to reply for some reason.

[rosetteroulette]

\o/

Of course! I love your writing. :)

[miezen]

;3; I'm honored.

I really should write more things that aren't porn...but somehow every time I sit down to write, it ends in Austria and Hungary having sex.

[florville14]

Very, very sexy stuff. I could picture the female Austria very well, and you kept Roderich in character, so kudos to you. Plus, threesomes are hard to write, but you kept it all really even, which was nice. Also, great public service message about keeping your toys clean!

Um...I feel like an ass for mentioning this, but the bit where you had Austria in "deep throat position" so Hungary could catch her breath? I thought I should point out that it's physically impossible to do so. If one deep-throats, that means Prince Charming is blocking his Lady's airway with his shaft. ^^; I hope nobody hates me for mentioning that... *hides from potential flying objects*

[miezen]

♥ Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you liked it.

...Oops. Thanks, I'll keep that in mind for the future! I more meant just kind of rest and regather composure than actual breath, but well. Bad word choice. And it still doesn't quite work out. Slips like that can always happen when writing something you don't have a great deal of personal experience with, no matter how much you think you know, and that's a good reminder of it.

No need to feel like an ass; concrit is always good and useful, yo.

[florville14]

Ah, I'm relieved. And yes, I really did like it! The idea of a female Austria is quite appealing indeed, and I've not seen it written very often. Sometimes concrit isn't appreciated in the slightest, so it's always best to word things carefully. And LOL about the "personal experience" comment. I can't say anything without incriminating myself, so I shall just smile and nod. *smiles and nods*

[miezen]

Well I'm glad ♥. I really had fun writing this. Actually I roleplay as fem!Austria so she's on my mind pretty often.

Yeah, I'm not the sort of person who can't take concrit. I welcome it, actually. Also I went ahead and fixed that passage. Thanks again for pointing that out.

Pfff. Well it's not that I don't have any personal experience but it's still easy enough to mess something like that up, yay TMI

[bezmrok]

This is probably the best fanfic for someone whose OTP is AusHun xD It aldo gave me another brilliant idea for a fic: "Hetalia" character x its "Nyotalia" equivalent. Some people had made such stories with either Prussia or America, but I suppose HungaryxMangary would be twice as awesome XD.

[miezen]

Pff, idk about that, but I am rather proud of this. Thanks~

fem!Prussia/Prussia is a beautiful thing, and I actually ship Doitsuko/Germany pretty hard. Austria/Femstria is also fun...

[ichhii]

Oh my... You're gonna go to hell for that xdd or to porn heaven! After that I'm kinda shocked but it was just a pleasure to read this... xddd

[miezen]

I'm glad you liked it~

And pfff, I think I secured my place in Hell long ago ♥

[ichhii]

it's pretty obvious that Devil is waitng for you... Wanna more of your stuff @_@