[FIC] - The Halloween That Was Hot as Hell

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So instead of being an intelligent person and going to bed at a reasonable time last night, I stayed up writing this. It's AusHun because I am predictable, and it's R18, also because I am predictable.

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....lmao actually that particular scene was the idea that I had that demanded me to get out of bed and write this instead of sleeping like a normal person. The rest kind of fell into place around that. Does that earn me extra perv points?

[theroxster]

this is A+++++ why on Earth hadn't I seen this before omggg. I love how hot this was. The fandom needs more of them like this *__*

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Thanks! I like how this ended up getting posted on Austria's birthday, too. I wasn't planning that!

....tbh this fandom just needs more of them at all period. And more het smut. And yuri. And non-smut for both het and yuri. Oh hell, how about just a reminder that not everything needs to be about cock and buttsex?

[jaemu]

You pretty much know how much I am absolutely, unequivocally in love with this fic, but I think it's high time that I actually comment here so you have a permanent reference.
So first of all, the biggest cheer I have for you is how realistic the sex was. I mean, where in any fanfiction, namely in this fandom, does a man actually become exhausted? Listen people! Guys can't go and go and go and go unless they have some kind of magical ability of... insatiable desire! Even then, they probably at least have a cool down of 15 seconds. I don't even know where I'm going with this tangent but seriously... THANK YOU FOR MAKING HIM ACTUALLY LIKE... A MAN.
The next thing I wanted to point out was my initial shock about the, uh, toy. At first I was like... WHAT!!? o////o It's just so unexpected and the fact that it wasn't expected was really what made it so...
so...
soooooooooooooooo
sooo............................................ hot.
So, um. Yes.
Very very very hot.
The entire fic was incredibly hot. It was, for lack of a better phrase, hot

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;3; ilu honey and this comment made my day~

I'll keep writing, that's certain :3

[vysnia_cerasus]

Wow, great job! I've been meaning to read/review, so I hope you don't mind this being so late.

I liked how you incorporated the usage of their Halloween banner costumes into things and wrote doctor-play around it, and the vibrator coming from that "aid kit" XD.

And you used the proper Hungarian cognate for Hungary's human name too! Not too many writers have done that, at least from the stories I've read. That's a nice touch.

Do you plan to write more of these two?

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Of course I don't mind the late reply! I'm just glad people are actually looking at it at all ;A;

Well, those costumes are really sexy and thus begging for porn centered around them *A*

Yeah, I can never decide which name I like better for her. Of course Erzsebét is the correct one technically, but I like Elizaveta a lot too because using Lizzy as a nickname is too cute.

Of course I do!

[sheraccoon]

Warning: I FAIL AT FIC COMMENTS. ;A;

My favorite part of the whole fic was possibly your characterization of Austria. Or the development of Austria. Then again, I am incredibly biased towards that lovely man. It did feel a bit short though, as in, his switcharoo to his character mode, but I am definitely not complaining, no in the least. *____*

I wish there were more foreplay details, because seriously, foreplay is HOT. Hotter than sex IMO. Hehehehe. :3 I would love to read more of your AusHun! If you write anymore! YOU SHOULD. Because you write lovely, hot, AusHun. *O* And there can never be enough AusHun loving. ♥

GOD I REALLY LOVE YOUR AUSTRIA. I should go back and reread for Hungary but let me bask in the Austria glow for a while... Hehe. THIS IS AWESOME. \o/

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Remind me sometime and I'll dig out links to the other stuff I've written :3