Fic: Sense and Wonder (Weir/Shep, NC-17)

[miera_c]

Title: Sense and Wonder
Author: miera_c
Episode: "The Real World"
Summary: He can still taste her.
Pairings: Weir/Sheppard
Main characters: Weir, Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: explicit content, angst!
Spoilers: "Progeny" and "Real World"
Beta: melyanna
Disclaimer: The Stargate universe belongs to a lot of people who are not me. More's the pity.

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[miera_c]

Yes. The post-ep fic had been done so many times I didn't want to just repeat it.

Storm/Eye is presenting the same problems. Rar.

[pantherlady08]

Well done. I like how you handled this episode and it was great to read from a pre-ep POV not too mention John's torture watching her and feeling so helpless.

[miera_c]

Thank you! In my head of course that episode has always read like he's worried about Elizabeth because of how he feels about her (which is why he's so cute and bouncy at the end), but now I got to flesh that out. ;)

[hariboo]

I like you bring a whole new level to the angst John was showing in the episode.

John feels the knot of tension in him easing. It has nothing to do with his erection, which is still straining at his boxers, and everything to do with knowing this is real.

Sexy, angsty John is love, and: When he sees Elizabeth lying unconscious on the floor of her office, for a split second John wonders if he is still dreaming.

I can picture that moment so perfectly. *huggles*

[miera_c]

Sexy, angsty John is love

He really is.

I originally had Elizabeth fainting in front of him, but I have this weird feeling she was sitting in her office alone when she passed out in this episode. And then John came into her office to talk to her about something and found her on the floor (and of course all hell broke loose).

[gospikey]

Oh, I loved this! It's about my first fic I read of this pairing (I pretty much just started looking for Stargate fics and I look for all Michael/Teyla). I like your style very, very much! You're a good writer. Which is a 'phew' moment for me cos I'd like to read your M/T fic and I can't cos it's flocked? :-P

You popped up on my friends list, but I guess I haven't been friended back (yet). :D

Pwease? *Angel face*

Enjoy this evening (for me, tomorrow with the download) as it's the last ep in a while!

Thanks for the great fic!

Spikey

[miera_c]

Hunh. I've written Teyla/Michael? I've written so many things, I can't keep track anymore!

Oh, right. It's here about 1/3 of the way down the page (the letter O). Sorry, that's the only time I've written them (or will ever write them).

I'm not adding anyone to my flist right now as I'm very busy with VS4 and all that real life stuff. But thanks for the feedback! :)

[anuna_81]

I like how you left this in the middle of the trouble. Most of TRW fics happened after Elizabeth woke up and had to deal with everything that happened. I love how you described John being protective and possessive. I could *see* him. Plus it was HOT.

Thank you.

[miera_c]

Yup yup yup. I wanted to do something that hadn't been done repeatedly (and very well) by other people. Which is harder when dealing with certain episodes!

Thanks!

[anuna_81]

I think TRW is on top of that list. I feared I'd get that, or The Storm/The Eye, because it's been done so many times, and so many aspects were covered.

I love your way of saying a lot with little words. :)