New Fic: Retribution

[midwinterlost]

Title: Retribution
Rating: NC-17
Words: Aprx. 5,000. Yes, you read right. 5,000 words for a pornbattle. I'm bonkers.
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Summery: Kara has found out about Lee's exploits aboard the Rising Star, and is very angry. Lee is furious about finding out Kara did Anders on Caprica, months ago. Sexing proceeds.
Author's Notes: This was written

Comments

[helikedmyshoes]

This was very hot! A little confused about the logistics in the stall... Her other hand managed to position Lee's legs so that one was over the edge of the top of the cubicle, the other wrapped around her neck awkwardly. . They were 69ing, yes? But how, if they weren't lying down? Confused...

But the smut was super hot, damn! And the ending was sweet. Great job.

[midwinterlost]

Thanks a lot!
Yeah, the position is a little difficult to imagine, and likily not many people would find themselves in it, but basicially, the idea is that Kara is sitting on the toilet, legs spread wide, and Lee's upside down, doing a sort of handstand, with one of his legs around Kara's neck and the other foot hooked over the edge of the stall wall, and Kara's holding onto his waist with one hand. Sooo, it's rather awkward...but, sexual tension and all that :)
Esentially, just imagine a 69, and rotate 90 degrees:)
A standing 69.
And the last part, they are lying down, by the way, if you didn't notice the transition.