We have nothing to touch this engine, for brooklinegirl

Aug 08, 2009 17:45

For: brooklinegirl
Title: We have nothing to touch this engine
Fandom: My Life as a Dog, Johnny/Louis
Author: slidellra
Rating: porny
Prompt: "My Life as a Dog - Johnny/Louis. (anything at all, but Louis comforting Johnny after Zoe throws him out would be WONDERFUL.)" I figured BLG meant "Louis comforting Johnny with his penis," obviously.

We have nothing to touch this engine )

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mergatrude August 11 2009, 05:32:37 UTC
Awwww! Such a happy-making story. YAY! &hearts &hearts &hearts

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slidellra August 11 2009, 19:24:40 UTC
Thanks, honey! And YAY YAY YAY for you! \\\\midsummer////

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china_shop August 16 2009, 23:30:30 UTC
Louis catches the collar of Johnny's shirt in his mouth, sucking and dampening the fabric and it helps, every little bit helps

Mmmmmmmmmmm... *loves* I adore how easy and innocent this seems, full of warmth and lust and familiarity. Zoe waiting in the wings makes it feel like Brokeback Mountain with the angst dial turned down to minus three. Heh.

<3 <3 <3

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lamentables August 17 2009, 16:30:52 UTC
Like china says, I love the ease and innocence of this - both in the characters and in your descriptive language. How do you manage to be explicit and yet all about affect not mechanics? *admires*

I feel all languid after reading this. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

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