"Double Luck" for slidellra

Aug 07, 2009 18:28

For: slidellra
Title: Double Luck
Fandom: Double Happiness
Author: china_shop
Rating: G-rated
Length: 1900 words
Beta thanks: Many many thanks to stickmarionette and isiscolo for beta.
Summary: Set post-movie. Jade tries to make sense of her place in the world. I was a small cloud in the vastness of the sky - I could evaporate any time or dissolve into rain, and no one would notice.

Double Luck )

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sundayscat August 7 2009, 07:25:04 UTC
I haven't actually seen the source but i really liked this, i loved the use of first person and the poetic language.

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china_shop August 9 2009, 03:55:02 UTC
Oh thank you! I really wasn't sure it would work for anyone who hadn't seen the film, so I'm delighted you enjoyed it. :-D

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c_regalis August 7 2009, 08:53:57 UTC
This made me happy. <3

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china_shop August 9 2009, 03:55:16 UTC
Thanks! \o/

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petronelle August 7 2009, 11:28:07 UTC
This feels like what happened next, complete with the hovering over all the wrong birthday cards and the terrible jokes. I love the light touch you've used with the words, and the clarity of everything; it's just right.

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china_shop August 9 2009, 03:56:33 UTC
Thanks! I'm so glad it worked for you. :-D

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scriggle August 7 2009, 11:40:32 UTC
This is lovely!

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china_shop August 9 2009, 03:56:49 UTC
Thanks! (Oh, icon! <3)

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akite August 7 2009, 15:53:35 UTC
The whole thing was marvelous, but I think the dumb jokes were the best part. It made me want to watch the movie again.

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china_shop August 9 2009, 03:57:18 UTC
Hee! Thanks. The internet is a very good source for dumb jokes! *g*

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