percy jackson. (luke/percy.)

Aug 12, 2010 19:53

four times percy didn't cry (and one time he did). | luke/percy (percy jackson).
pg. | au. | 1.7k words.
He doesn't want to cry. He doesn't like to show that side of himself. He's always prided himself on not losing his cool and he doesn't want to let go of that pride yet. Not here. Not at Luke's grave.

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fan: percy jackson, ch: percy jackson, ch: apollo, ch: sally blofis, ch: nico di angelo, ch: luke castellan, ch: grover underwood, ch: hermes, ! fic, rate: pg, ch: annabeth chase

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compos_dementis August 13 2010, 07:57:53 UTC
If only! Oh God, Luke was my favorite. I should've known - all my favorite characters are marked for death from the get-go.

Anyway, I love the premise for this. I wouldn't complain at all if you continued this into a longer fic with the two of them resettling relations.

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midnigthaze August 13 2010, 10:06:11 UTC
Luke was my favorite too.

I think I will continue this as the 4 times (and one time) type thing with various aspects of their new relationship. (:

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baterina_1234 August 13 2010, 11:53:40 UTC
I kind of wasn't really crying, but at the end, the moment I saw this: Percy doesn't know what exactly it is he's trying to say to Luke, but it's not getting past his lips. He feels like he's twelve again and Luke is the counselor and somewhat teacher that he has someone childish crush on. It's like all the bad Luke did, just disappears and he clings tightly to the blond, glad to be holding something solid. All the years seem to crush down on him and tears start treks down his face. AND this: i cried while writing this., I started to tear up. (IDK with the last one, I get emotional when I know other people are emotional.)

Beautiful. I lurve Luke x Percy. The pairing should have a nickname. Does it? I only know Percy x Nico's and it's funny. (Perico. :)) )

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midnigthaze August 13 2010, 17:30:47 UTC
Good luck with a nickname for them. Cause you go Peke, Puke, Lercy, Lurcy. They just don't mesh very well. Perico does though. Lolol (:

Thanks for reading. ♥

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jamiespartz August 13 2010, 12:56:48 UTC
Bri! Jamie (@youmybednow) here. Can I just say ASDFGHJKL;? My heart was breaking for Percy. I could feel how overwhelming this was for him. ;___________; I love it, I really do. ♥♥♥

A+ points for Apollo and Hermes (I ship them too)! /laughs

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midnigthaze August 13 2010, 17:31:41 UTC
OHYAYJAMIE! ♥

Thank you loveeeeeeee. ♥♥♥

OH. you caught that then? ;D

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midnigthaze August 13 2010, 17:32:49 UTC
=D yay! you just made me ridiculously happy with this comment! i've been missing them too. and with august eighteenth (;D) coming up, i'm trying to get back into the swing of writing them! ♥♥♥ there will be more. ♥

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midnigthaze August 15 2010, 03:53:28 UTC
yup, pretty much!

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lexstorm August 13 2010, 20:49:50 UTC
Hope you had a good reason to cry meanwhile writting, and also hope you're better now...
Your story was just great, and it is true that it's a little dark, but it's the right dose.
As one of the commenters said, if you have a chance you should do a round two, no tears next time, we don't want anyone on suicidal tentative ja ja, so if you write a chap two or sequel, have it for sure i'll be there.
And it's also great you posted it, it's been a few days since the last percy/luke, so you've just made my day, and not only mine, so in a weird sense, your sadness makes us happy, don't misunderstand me please, it's just that it seems sadness is your biggest muse.

Good luck and a happy smile for you =D
Alex

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midnigthaze August 15 2010, 03:55:56 UTC
Sort of did. Thank you(:

Round two will definitely have less tears, me thinks. More happy, upbeat. Maybe a little angst.

I got you(: My sadness really is my muse most of the time. That and anger. Negative emotion in general, I suppose.

<3 thanks.

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