percy jackson. (luke/percy.)

[midnigthaze]

broken by the bitterness of loneliness. | luke/percy (percy jackson).
pg. | au. movie based. | 794 words.
He's already come down this way once before, just to see if there would be any sign of Luke. He wants to quash the feeling inside him that he killed Luke. He doesn't want that to even be a possibility. There's some noble part of him that wants

Comments

[venacavaa]

This is wonderful; the characterizations are spot-on, especially Luke. He seems kind of hesitant and naive despite his villain ways, and I love that about this.

I'm really rather fond of this line: Luke takes a step forwards, which Percy counters with a step back, holding in a gulp when he realizes he's already at the edge.

Oh, and this one: Percy feels the shift in everything and somehow Luke has the upper hand on things just by simply standing there.

Yeah, just fantastic. ♥

[midnigthaze]

Unnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnh. Thank you! ♥

[midnigthaze]

thank you ♥ i might have to do a sequel to this.

[lexstorm]

you might have??? Nooo, you HAVE TO do a sequel for this. =D
It was a great story and it deserves to be continued....

So i hope to see an update soon
Alex.

[midnigthaze]

haha thanks! i'm working up some ideas for a sequel to it!

[reliand]

This is lovely and bittersweet and says so much in such a sparse amount of words! You should continue this :D

[midnigthaze]

Thank you! Working on a sequel. Or possibly even ideas for a series. =D

[reliand]

OMG! I can't wait to read it! There is not enough Luke/Percy fic in the world...and this would be a lovely addition!