fic: on a feeling that i never had part 2

[midnightrambles]

Comments

[miss_black91]

I fucking love this. I think that you know this, because I told you every time I got a bit of it in my mail, BUT I FUCKING LOVE THIS FANFIC. I love it baby, I do so much. Mouranka and UST and YOU and Aitor and José and YOU writing them (for me hehehehe mine hehehe all fic is mine hehhehehe ehhehHHEHEHEHEHEHHE MINE).

Thank you so much baby ♥ Better late than never no? :P

[midnightrambles]

i feel so sad though, like it's over :( after months of your lovely poking it's over :p but yes there is more of them on the way. i ended up really enjoying writing them together. they're both so different that they work perfectly together.

allllllllllllllllllll yours ♥ you are very very very welcome

[klauduhisninjuh]

This is... Oh my... I can't even describe it. Your Mou is so real I could feel his presence next to me while reading. This story is perfect and every detail has its own place <3

[midnightrambles]

mou's a sneaky bastard :p thank you very much! i've been with this fic for so long that i wasn't sure if it was working or not. so thank you for the feedback :)

[niela_xxx]

i have read this story yesterday. but i didn't have time to comment - i had to go back and do it today because i thought it was a wonderful story. first, i have to say these are not characters i'd usually read about, but it's a sign of a great story that i did. and your story was great, brilliant, actually! i love the development, the hints, the signs and how it all slowly came to existance between jose and aitor. you made characters so real, so believable i'm actually jealous. and also i enjoyed the bit of esteban and rui in this, such a wonderful relationship. thank you for this story, it's amazing!

[midnightrambles]

thank you! i really do appreciate it :)

i totally ship these two (especially after the whole "karanka portuguese" thing) so i hope there will be more fics of them and that you'll continue to read more of them too!

[msuse]

I read this yesterday and tried to comment, but LJ wouldn't let me :/

Anyway, I read it again today (yes, that's how good it is), and I have to say I loved it even more this time. The way you portrait Aitor and Mou is very similar to how I imagine them in real life. I can totally see Mou as closed off and impersonal. Good thing Aitor is there to loosen him up (pun intened) :p

I also adore Rui/Esteban (Esteban/anyone really), hopefully they managed to come across their differences ♥

[midnightrambles]

thank you! i'm glad you came back to comment :)

mou for me is easy to write but aitor was the difficult one so i'm glad it worked for you.

esteban is my secret love that isn't so secret anymore and i kind of have a thing with shipping him with coaches... i have a esteban/aitor yoga!au fic in the works... yeah idk XD

perfect fic!!

[rosiel4lucifer]

It's more than lovely!!! In the beginning I thought Jose is better portrayed here than Aitor... then I moved to the second part. Aww, your characterizations of both are perfect. I love how you mentioned sitting distance and other details, actions, and tiny changes of expressions and thoughts. Also the goal metaphor gosh, totally loved it!!
It feels so real. I finished it and read is all over again... can't get enough!
BTW, I saw that Karim and Pipa!! haha

Re: perfect fic!!

[midnightrambles]

thank you very much! writing aitor for me was a little difficult as he isn't in the media as much as mou.

(karim/pipa is so happening in my mind. i'm glad you caught it :p)