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midnightrambles

fic: you on my skin

Nov 06, 2010 01:56

title: you on my skin
pairing: dan agger/fernando torres
rating: nc-17
disclaimer: fiction

follows washable tattoos. for mikaylex, my fellow tattoo enthusiast ♥

( you on my skin )

footie!fic, dan agger, fernando torres

Comments 19

vicky86x November 6 2010, 10:27:10 UTC

wow it`s great that you continue washable tattoos! and you`ve done that in a really really great way, cause this doesn`t seem to be about the hot sex on the floor, but about the tattoo and what it stands for, trust and love. I love their conversation in the end. I can really see them lying on the floor, on their clothes talking about the tattoo with the rain as their "soundtrack" :)

I also like your little mentions of Liverpools season >>
it was like someone had thrown a lasso on their season and slowly pulled it away from the cliff.
>> that´s a great image :)

I really like the way you write &hearts and I wouldn`t mind if you continue the story ;)

_runningmascara November 6 2010, 19:01:30 UTC

thank you very much. sex scenes are always worrisome for me to write because i don't like it to be the only focus sometimes. so i'm glad you picked up on that! (plus the sound of rain is <33333)

thank you :) (and yes a continuation to follow!)

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_runningmascara November 6 2010, 19:01:42 UTC

thank you very much :)

lady_quark November 6 2010, 11:09:52 UTC

Must ... stop ... finding them intriguing. Must ... stop.
Guh.
Oh Raj, what are you even doing to me ....

_runningmascara November 6 2010, 19:02:34 UTC

i was the same way! i'm not... too fond of fernando but they make so much sense for some odd reason. plus tattoos? yup, it had to be done.

hehehe, glad you like it bb <3

marie16fh November 6 2010, 13:03:50 UTC

Amazing! Loved it :-)

... I think I might have a little tattoo kink.

The ending was very sweet, I like the mental image I'm getting of the two of them going to Denmark, Dan's home, and Dan tattooing Fernando.

_runningmascara November 6 2010, 19:03:43 UTC

i know i have a tattoo kink. so hot :p

thanks for reading :) glad you enjoyed it!

eileenyx November 6 2010, 20:21:12 UTC

I really enjoyed this. The kitchen floor sex is definitely no-frills hot, and I like how the vibe of the fic (and the pairing) is sexy and affectionate in a low-key, quiet, and easy way. I like how Fernando intends to spend the holidays with Dan, and how Dan adorably backtracks on his Denmark invite. The Dan/Fernando pairing just fits, IDEK.

Lovely. Thank you.