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scoobydumblonde June 21 2009, 05:10:59 UTC
Awwwww. She's so cute! And I love her wanting to make Father's Day such a good day for her papas. :-D

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_runningmascara June 22 2009, 06:18:20 UTC
:) thanks for reading this little verse i have going on. i know feli/nando aren't one of your favs so i appreciate it!

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ancient_arch June 21 2009, 05:39:02 UTC
oh my god. This made me alllll squishy and warm and omg gahhhh she's so adorable and I can't even take it.

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_runningmascara June 22 2009, 06:19:17 UTC
:D:D:D
babies/kids will do that to you lol

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piratesswoop June 21 2009, 05:59:29 UTC
Awwwwwww, what a sweet little girl--and I love her name!

This was so sweet, little Adalia wanting to make a surprise, uncle Carlos helping, Feli and Nando being all cute waking up together, the family moment at the end. Augh, this was so ridiculously cute<3

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_runningmascara June 22 2009, 06:19:57 UTC
Thank you :) (the name took awhile to choose so yay for the approval!)

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pretty_panther June 21 2009, 18:08:37 UTC
This is adoreable. I love this verse. It's beautiful, as is the way you write this pairing.

Great work!

xx

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_runningmascara June 22 2009, 06:20:28 UTC
swww thanks hunny *pets the boys*

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miss_warina June 22 2009, 01:04:44 UTC
ohhhhh, this was sooooo adorable =D
Thank youuuuu!, I'm anxiously waiting for the next part =P

you killed me with this: "Feliciano reaches out and grasps Fernando's hand into his own, bringing it up to his lips to place a kiss to Fernando's skin before he drops a kiss to Adalia'a hair as well"

XD

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_runningmascara June 22 2009, 06:21:15 UTC
:) thanks for reading!
more is to come!

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