Here's the interlude. It comes from the Kenny Chesney song "The Good Stuff." I don't know why, but apparently I'm only able to write interludes in the vein of a song. Oh well.
This was really good, quite different from what you've written. I really enjoy the flashbacks you've done. This one with Ennis and Jack having a spat was interesting. Very true to life. I know the Kenny Chesney song and it was perfect for this. I loved the conversation with the "old" bar tender! It was super when Jack went home and that ending was grand!
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